Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Project: Heroism (Translation: Twilight Heroine)

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(Last Edited: 2012/4/18)

This is for the Japanese to English Language Version:
imageHeroism
Click here to begin reading!

Here are the large files


Work force: Image
    Translator: Lunitari (Twilight Heroine did the first 1/2)
    Editor: ---
    Proofreader: Cavalier
    Scanned by: Melora

Extra Notes:
    * We've been talking: Will probably be worked on again near the end of the month!
Anything I am saying about it is in This colour
:?: = Japanese help

---Twilight Heroine
This will probably need a lot of editing since this is my first time XD
This is the first half, I will be busy tomorrow and this weekend with work, so I thought it would be best to post this now


Page 005

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/005.JPG

SFX: BOOM! [white background SFX throughout the page; means a menancing sound]

Panel 1:
SFX: Kaboom! [black background SFX]
M: Ahhhhhh! 

Panel 2/3:
L: Uh!
M: Ahhhh! 

Panel 4:
L: Midna
M: Ahhhh!
SFX: Tup

Panel 5:
SFX: Ah!



Page 006:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/006.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: GRAAAAAAWR

Panel 2:
SFX: Turn

Panel 3:
SFX: Ah!
L: Midna

Panel 4:
SFX: Thump thump
SFX: Creak 

Panel 5:
SFX: Roooooooar
SFX: Ka! [impact sound]



Page 007/008:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/007.JPG
http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/008.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: Crack

Panel 2:
G: At last goro...

Panel 3:
R: Mr. Link.

Panel 4: 
S: What in the world...is that?

Panel 5:
T: That child is finally doing it.

Panel 6: 
SFX: Woosh



Page 009:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/009.JPG

Panel 1:
MonsterMidna: Link the Hero

Panel 2:
L: Stop this Midna!
SFX: Roar



Page 010:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/010.JPG

Panel 1:
L: Once the outcome is solved, let's return :?:

L: Why is her magical power...so reckless?

Panel 2:
L: I need to attack...

but...


Panel 3:
L: that's Midna...



Page 011

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/011.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: Crash!
SFX: Dodge

Panel 2:
L: I have to attack her after all...I just can't reason with her.
SFU: Gu
L: But
how can I...

Panel 3:
SFX: :?:

Panel 4:
SFX: Twooo~ Fairy sound

Panel 5:
SFX: Roar!
L: That's...



Page 012

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/012.JPG

SFX throughout the page: Roaring

Panel 1:
L: That's it! or "I got it"

Panel 2:
L: The only way to save Midna Lit: "help", but I thought save sounded better 
is to tear it off!

Panel 3:
L: Midna



Page 013

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/013.JPG

Panel 1:
L: I'm sorry...
SFX: Grip

Panel 2:
L:...uh!
SFX: Ba!

Panel 3:
?: Uooooooooooo! Not sure if this is Link or MonsterMidna, and I am not even sure if it matters XD
SFX: Swish~

Panel 4:
L: Hit it!



Page 014

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/014.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: Ka!

Panel 2:
L: GO!
SFX: Jyarararara chain releasing

Panel 3:
SFX: :?: not sure what it reads

Panel 4:
SFX: Clash

Panel 5:
L: Got it!
SFX: :?: not sure what it reads



Page 015

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/015.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: Roar

Panel 2:
SFX: Hup
SFX: Jyara [chain finishing winding up]

Panel 4:
SFX: DON!



Page 016

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/016.JPG

Panel 1:
L: Huuuuu Deep breath

Panel 2:
SFX: Grab

Panel 3:
SFX: Means "quick progress", any ideas?
L: Ah!

Panel 4:
L: Ahhhhhhhhh



Page 17:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/017.JPG

Panel 1:
L: uh!

Panel 2:
L: Mid...na

Panel 3:
SFX: Clatter
SFX: Shaaaaaaa



Page 18:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/018.JPG

SFX: Shaaaaaaa



Page 19:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/019.JPG

Panel 1:
L: ...uuuuuh..

Panel 2:
SFX: Ah!

Panel 3:
L: Midna!



Page 20:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/020.JPG

Panel 1:
L: Mid...na
SFX: Zuki means a sharp pain 

Panel 2:
L: a
SFX: Doro hearbeat?

Panel 3:
L: uh!
SFX: Zuki! Zuki!
SFX: drag
SFX: heavy breathing

Panel 4:
L: I've got to get to her lit: I've got to go
SFX: Drip
SFX: Grab

---Melora---

If anyone else wants to pick this up, you would be more than welcome to! About half of it is left

---Lunitari---
In keeping with Twilight Heroine's format...


Page 21

Panel 1
Link: MIDNA!


Panel 2
In place of Midna... :?:
SFX: No idea about that one or even if I got the right characters because it ends up giving you Zaaamama


Panel 3
picture only


Panel 4
Link: Midna
SFX: :?:


Panel 5
Link: I lost Midna.


Page 22

Panel 1
Link: Midna...I'm so sorry.


Panel 2
Midna: ..nn

Panel 3
Midna: Link?


Panel 4
Link: Midna!
Why are you crying?

Panel 5
Midna: ...I'm sorry.


Panel 6
Link: It’s ok...I’m safe. Don’t cry anymore.


Page 23

Panel 1
Midna: So that's what became of the boundary.

Panel 2
SFX: :?:

Panel 3
Link: It unraveled...yes.

Panel 4
Midna: We can now help the Princess on request :?:

Panel 5 (the lettering in between the panels)
Eh...

Panel 6
SFX: :?:


Page 24

Panel 1
Midna: Link!

Panel 2
Link: You...What happened?
I'm sorry...I can't seem do anything right.

Panel 3
Midna: What ... is it okay (literally)
What?!…Are you alright? (better translation :?: )

Panel 4
Midna: What's this...

Panel 5
It's...

Panel 6
...blood?

Panel 7
Midna: Why?!
LINK...
MY LINK... :?:

---Lunitari---
Added 2 more pages. I need to find a book or a site though that explains manga sound effects though. I tried translating a few but they didn't seem to make sense.

---Cavalier---
Lunitari when your done let me know if you want this localized and I'd be happy to do so for you.

---Melora---
OH NOOOO! the good site I knew of is GONE T_T
I found it on the way back machine though: http://web.archive.org/web/201003260735 ... undfx.html

But that still doesn't have the untranslated Japanese version, if you need help with that. I know there are books for that, so there MUST be something online.

This one also has the SFX once they're translated, explaining kind of what they should mean:http://www.xamuel.com/examples-of-japan ... matopoeia/

These are just for ideas:
http://www.soundsafaritheater.com/onomatopoeia.html
http://www.writtensound.com/index.php?term=movement

Ignore this, I just copied that site's code, so we wont lose it. *after break

---Melora---
Is all that is left on this the SFX?
I need to find someone to do the SFX on another project, if that's all that is left here I can ask for both :3

---Twilight Heroine---
Anything I am saying about it is in This colour
:?: = Japanese help

I figured out a few things that had me stumped before, so I am posting this first before going over the final half I have translated one more time. I might have it ready tomorrow morning if I get to sleep soon XD

Page 010:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/010.JPG

Panel 1:
L: Another barrier is solved. Please come back :?: Fixed this a bit more, but I am still not sure about the first part ^^; 


Page 011

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/011.JPG

Panel 3:
SFX: *float*


Page 14

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/014.JPG

Panel 3
SFX:*swoosh*


Page 21

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/021.JPG

Panel 2
In place of Midna... :?: "In Midna's place..." maybe :) 
SFX: *ssssssss* Sound of rain



Page 23

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/023.JPG

Panel 2
SFX: *saaaaaa..*

Panel 4
Midna: But don't rescue the Princess like this.

Panel 6
SFX: *whump*



Main Part:

Page 25

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/025.JPG

Panel 1
M: Link! Why....this?

Panel 2
SFX: Gushing
SFX: Ba-bump
M? (Thinking): It's not stopping

Panel 3
L: This is fine "This is it" Perhaps
L: Midna

Panel 4
L: It's good that you're safe.
M(thinking): ...huh?

Panel 5
L: I got to protect you...it's for the best.
M(T): It can't be!

Panel 6
M(T): This is my fault

Panel 7
M(T): Link!
L: Guh!



Page 26

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/026.JPG

Panel 1
M(T): This was for helping me.
M: This is horrible! You are dying Link!

Panel 2
M: You are so brave. Who will protect this world if you do not stay? Last part literally means "cease to exist"

Panel 3
SFX: *rising up*
SFX: drip

Panel 4
M: I...I killed you even though you were trying to save me
L: Midna



Page 27

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/027.JPG

Panel 1
L: You're wrong.

Panel 2
L: I'm not brave.

Panel 3
M: ....huh?

Panel 4
L: I... just wanted to protect [save] those important to me. I wished to be a hero. That's not a reason. :?: 

Panel 5
L: So, Midna, you are not a murderer, and in no way can.

Panel 6
L: Now I am...just for you...a hero.
SFX: *sigh*
M: Link


Page 28

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/028.JPG

Panel 1
M: Lin...k

Panel 2
M: Would you...lie...?

Panel 3
M: UWAAAAAAAA!

Panel 4
M: This....What's this....hate... don't die link!

Panel 5
M: This guy...even though he was hurt he saved other people.....the world. It shouldn't end like this.
M: help me save him...



Page 29

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/029.JPG

Panel 1
M: Someone..

Panel 2
SFX: *twoo* (Fairy sound)

Panel 3
M: ...ah
SFX: woosh

Panel 4
SFX: fizzle

Panel 5
SFX: twitch
L: ..unnn

Panel 6
M: Link!


Page 30

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/030.JPG

Panel 1
SFX: *sit up*
L?: .... I am still here...

Panel 2
L: ...Midna?

Panel 3
L: Are you crying?



Page 31

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/031.JPG

Panel 1
L: Sorry

Panel 2
L: Uh..!

Panel 4
SFX: *thump*
L: Um....M...Miss Midna? This is the first time in the doujishi he has used "san" in regards to Midna, so I thought the "Miss" might be necessary

Panel 5
L: ........ah Really don't know what else to put there, it's really just a bunch of exclamations on this page XD

Panel 6
SFX: *squeeze*
L: I'm sorry.


Page 32

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/032.JPG

Panel 1
L: But how did I...

Panel 2
L: The fairy

Panel 3
L: The fairy saved me.



Page 33

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/033.JPG

Panel 1
L(?): But that Fairy is with

L(?):that person


Panel 2
L:That person helped me


Panel 3
L: You are always
L: watching 


Page 34

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/034.JPG

Panel 1
L:...yeah

Panel 2
SFX: *pat*


Panel 3
L:Let's go

Panel 4
L: help Princess Zelda

Panel 5
M:...yeah


Page 35

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/035.JPG

Panel 1
L: Let's go!

Panel 2 
Narrator: In order to put an end to all


Page 37

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/037.JPG

Panel 1
M: Hey, Link

Panel 2
M:Promise me something

Panel 3
M: Absolutely
M: don't die

Panel 4
SFX:

Panel 6
L: I'm not gonna lose the "I" is in the next bubble


Page 38

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/038.JPG

Panel 1
L: I will properly save

L: Princess Zelda....and Midna


Panel 2
L: Trust me.

Panel 3
M:....yeah.
M?(T): All right

Panel 4
M: I'll count on it. 
M?(T): This time ....this time around

Panel 5
SFX: *creak*
M: I'll protect the "hero".

---Cavalier---

Hey guys. Finally got the time to localize this. It was a bit difficult getting into the flow of this one as its essentially a conversation, and it got a little abstract and fragmentary, but I think I got it right. Let me know if there's anything you want changed, or if I didn't properly understand something. Also even if everythings fine, please let me know. Sometimes I finish these localizations and I'm not sure anyone in the translation project realizes its finished. So just give me a heads up either way. Thanks again for all your patience. I hope you guys like it :)


Page 005

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/005.JPG

SFX: BOOM! [white background SFX throughout the page; means a menancing sound]

Panel 1:
SFX: Kaboom! [black background SFX]
M: Ahhhhhh! 

Panel 2/3:
L: Uh!
M: Ahhhh! 

Panel 4:
L: Midna
M: Ahhhh!
SFX: Tup

Panel 5:
SFX: Ah!



Page 006:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/006.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: GRAAAAAAWR

Panel 2:
SFX: Turn

Panel 3:
SFX: Ah!
L: Midna

Panel 4:
SFX: Thump thump
SFX: Creak 

Panel 5:
SFX: Roooooooar
SFX: Ka! [impact sound]



Page 007/008:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/007.JPG
http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/008.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: Crack

Panel 2:
G: At last goro...

Panel 3:
R: Brother-Link.

Panel 4: 
S: What in the world...is that?

Panel 5:
T: That boy is finally doing it.

Panel 6: 
SFX: Woosh



Page 009:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/009.JPG

Panel 1:
MonsterMidna: Link the Hero

Panel 2:
L: Stop this Midna!
SFX: Roar



Page 010:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/010.JPG

Panel 1:
L: Once we've completed our quest, we can return to the way things were!
L: Why is her power...so out of control?

Panel 2:
L: I need to attack...

but...


Panel 3:
L: But that monster is Midna... my friend, my companion



Page 011

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/011.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: Crash!
SFX: Dodge

Panel 2:
L: I have to attack her..There is no reasoning with her now.
SFU: Gu
L: But
how can I...

Panel 3:
SFX: :?:

Panel 4:
SFX: Twooo~ Fairy sound

Panel 5:
SFX: Roar!
L: That's...



Page 012

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/012.JPG

SFX throughout the page: Roaring

Panel 1:
L: That's it! or "I got it"

Panel 2:
L: The only way to save Midna is to tear that mask off!

Panel 3:
L: Midna



Page 013

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/013.JPG

Panel 1:
L: I'm sorry...
SFX: Grip

Panel 2:
L:...uh!
SFX: Ba!

Panel 3:
?: Uooooooooooo! 
SFX: Swish~

Panel 4:
L: I have only one shot!


Page 014

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/014.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: Ka!

Panel 2:
L: GO!
SFX: Jyarararara chain releasing

Panel 3:
SFX: :?: not sure what it reads

Panel 4:
SFX: Clash

Panel 5:
L: Got it!
SFX: :?: not sure what it reads



Page 015

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/015.JPG

Panel 1:
SFX: Roar

Panel 2:
SFX: Hup
SFX: Jyara [chain finishing winding up]

Panel 4:
SFX: DON!



Page 016

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/016.JPG

Panel 1:
L: Huuuuu Deep breath

Panel 2:
SFX: Grab

Panel 3:
SFX: Means "quick progress", any ideas?
L: Ah!

Panel 4:
L: Ahhhhhhhhh



Page 17:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/017.JPG

Panel 1:
L: uh!

Panel 2:
L: Mid...na

Panel 3:
SFX: Clatter
SFX: Shaaaaaaa



Page 18:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/018.JPG

SFX: Shaaaaaaa



Page 19:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/019.JPG

Panel 1:
L: ...uuuuuh..

Panel 2:
SFX: Ah!

Panel 3:
L: Midna!



Page 20:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/020.JPG

Panel 1:
L: Mid...na
SFX: Zuki means a sharp pain 

Panel 2:
L: a
SFX: Doro hearbeat?

Panel 3:
L: uh!
SFX: Zuki! Zuki!
SFX: drag
SFX: heavy breathing

Panel 4:
L: I must reach her!
SFX: Drip
SFX: Grab[/quote]

Page 21

Panel 1
Link: MIDNA!


Panel 2
In Midna's Chamber
SFX: No idea about that one or even if I got the right characters because it ends up giving you Zaaamama


Panel 3
picture only


Panel 4
Link: Midna
SFX: :?: 


Panel 5
Link: I lost her.


Page 22

Panel 1
Link: Midna...I'm so sorry.


Panel 2
Midna: ..nn

Panel 3
Midna: Link?


Panel 4
Link: Midna!
Why are you crying?

Panel 5
Midna: ...I'm sorry.


Panel 6
Link: It’s ok...I’m fine now. Please, don’t cry anymore.


Page 23

Panel 1
Midna: So that's what became of the boundary.

Panel 2
SFX: :?: 

Panel 3
Link: Yes…the boundary has finally fallen.

Panel 4
Midna: We can now aid the Princess

Panel 5 (the lettering in between the panels)
Eh...

Panel 6
SFX: :?: 


Page 24

Panel 1
Midna: Link!

Panel 2
Link: You...What happened?
I'm sorry...I can't seem do anything right.

Panel 3
Midna: Link! Whats wrong?

Panel 4
Midna: What's this...

Panel 5
It's...

Panel 6
...blood?

Panel 7
Midna: Why?!
LINK...

Page 010:

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/010.JPG

Panel 1:
L: Another barrier has fallen. Come back to me...

Page 011

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/011.JPG

Panel 3:
SFX: *float*


Page 14

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/014.JPG

Panel 3
SFX:*swoosh*


Page 21

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/021.JPG

Panel 2
In Midna's chamber
SFX: *ssssssss* Sound of rain



Page 23

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/023.JPG

Panel 2
SFX: *saaaaaa..*

Panel 4
Midna: It cant end…not like this….

Panel 6
SFX: *whump*



Main Part:

Page 25

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/025.JPG

Panel 1
M: Link! Why....?

Panel 2
SFX: Gushing
SFX: Ba-bump
M? (Thinking): The blood…it wont stop flowing...

Panel 3
L: This is it…
L: Midna

Panel 4
L: It's good that you're safe.
M(thinking): …what?

Panel 5
L: I wanted to protect you…and I did.
M(T): No! Link!

Panel 6
M(T): This is my fault

Panel 7
M(T): Link!
L: Guh!



Page 26

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/026.JPG

Panel 1
M(T): This is all because you tried to save me.
M: This can't be happening! You are dying Link!

Panel 2
M: You've been so brave. Without you, who will defend this world?

Panel 3
SFX: *rising up*
SFX: drip

Panel 4
M: I'm responsible…..I did this to you even though you were trying to save me
L: Midna



Page 27

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/027.JPG

Panel 1
L: You're wrong.

Panel 2
L: I'm not brave.

Panel 3
M: ....huh?

Panel 4
L: I... just wanted to protect those important to me. I wanted to be a hero. That's not bravery… 

Panel 5
L: This is not your fault Midna….

Panel 6
L: But now I've done it…I saved you…I can die a hero.
SFX: *sigh*
M: Link


Page 28

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/028.JPG

Panel 1
M: Link…

Panel 2
M: Please...

Panel 3
M: UWAAAAAAAA!

Panel 4
M: I cannot accept this….please Link…. don't die!

Panel 5
M: This boy…even though he was hurt he saved those he cared for…..and this entire world. It cannot end like this.
M: Please someone….help me save him...



Page 29

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/029.JPG

Panel 1
M: Someone..

Panel 2
SFX: *twoo* (Fairy sound)

Panel 3
M: ...ah
SFX: woosh

Panel 4
SFX: fizzle

Panel 5
SFX: twitch
L: ..unnn

Panel 6
M: Link!


Page 30

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/030.JPG

Panel 1
SFX: *sit up*
L?: .... I am still here...

Panel 2
L: ...Midna?

Panel 3
L: Are you crying?



Page 31

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/031.JPG

Panel 1
L: Sorry

Panel 2
L: Uh..!

Panel 4
SFX: *thump*
L: Uhh…lady Midna? 

Panel 5
L: ........ah 

Panel 6
SFX: *squeeze*
L: I'm sorry.


Page 32

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/032.JPG

Panel 1
L: But how did I...

Panel 2
L: The fairy...

Panel 3
L: The fairy saved me.



Page 33

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/033.JPG

Panel 1
L(?): But that Fairy is with

L(?):that person


Panel 2
L:That person who helped me


Panel 3
L: That person….
L: whose watched over me 


Page 34

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/034.JPG

Panel 1
L:...yeah

Panel 2
SFX: *pat*


Panel 3
L:Let's go

Panel 4
L: The Princess needs us.

Panel 5
M:...yeah


Page 35

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/035.JPG

Panel 1
L: Let's go!

Panel 2 
Narrator: Rise or fall….the end draws near.


Page 37

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/037.JPG

Panel 1
M: Hey, Link

Panel 2
M:Promise me something

Panel 3
M: Promise me...
M: you wont die

Panel 4
SFX:

Panel 6
L: I can't fail now


Page 38

http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... rr/038.JPG

Panel 1
L: I'll save

L: Princess Zelda....and you Midna


Panel 2
L: Trust me.

Panel 3
M:....yeah.
M?(T): Alright

Panel 4
M: I'll hold you to that. 
M?(T): This time ....this time around

Panel 5
SFX: *creak*
M: I'll protect the "hero".

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DONE!



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