Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Project: Greendog (Editing: Melora)

(Last Edited: 2012/9/21)
This is for the Japanese to English Language Version:
imageGreendog

Read it: http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... index.html

Large scans: http://melorasworld.com/zelda/publicati ... wg_melora/
(I uploaded a zip of the large files)


Work force: Image
    Translator: Rina (Rinael)
    Editor: Cephae Melora
    Localization: Cavalier 
    Scanned by: Melora

Extra Notes:
    * Credit Rina as Rinael on the tags

---Rina---
Melora here: I'm just posting this and then transferring it over to Rina. She's been busy so this came over email. I'll be right back to edit it a bit :) I put Rina's notes in this color of blue.

Page 004
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Panel 1
The chosen hero Link travels through seven years of time, holding the master sword high to the oath he made to Princess Zelda

In order to save the country and the people he loves, he takes the Ocarina of Time and starts a legend

He advances and brings light to the future and past, and at the roots of it all, the Triforce

And stopping Ganondorf, whose distorted wish is to lead the world to ruin

Since the events of Ocarina of Time, many hundred years have passed

And again, a sacred one is starting a new legend....!

Panel 2
....or how it was supposed to be.

A mysterious girl and dog strolling around playfully: Twilight Princess

sfx: Let's go!!

sfx: woff woff

And the more you think about it, the more you like it.

Page 005
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Title: Broke
Panel 1
L: Huh, I didn't realize I hardly have any rupees left

I wanted to buy some items, but collecting rupees is so troublesome....

M: What about the rupee treasure chests still left in the dungeons

How about getting these? Definitely less tiring than cutting grass

Panel 2
L: Oh!

You're right!

M: I still remember where, so let's go!

L: Gotcha!

Panel 3
And so they went to a dungeon

and quickly found a chest

sfx: clack

L: I wonder how many rupees...!

...Huh

Panel 4
You found the dungeon map

sfx: dadadadaaa da dadadaaa

M: Oh?

small at bottom: That happened to me already three times

Page 006
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Title: Unfilial Behavior (I don't know that word?)
Panel 1
M: Hey, why are you wearing the magic armor?

L: You know, I've collected so many rupees...

In order to reduce them I decided to move around in it for a while

Panel 2
L: uwah

sfx: boing

sfx: sound of a horse (Neigh?)

Panel 3
M: Strange, the effect shouldn't have worn off, yet you can't move....

L: Maybe she isn't feeling fine?

M: Possibly he armor is too rugged for her?

Panel 4
E: I don't remember raising a child

E: who is spending money so carelessly!

Artist-small: For me, Epona is like a mother figure to Link

Page 007
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Title: Swelling/Undulation
Panel 1
Box: Chuchu jelly

sfx: gulp gulp gulp

sfx: Uwah... (by Midna)

M: You really drink that often, Link...

Panel 2
L: It tastes surprisingly good and is healthy

M: No, I actually meant how you're feeling....

L: Except for lantern oil, I put everything edible into it

And I think faeries are just absorbed

M: Mmh.....

Panel 3
Box: Worms

sfx in background: swell (like dizzy?)

Big text: In order to preserve your well-being, this scene will be shown in mosaic

Panel 4
M: Hey, get up and drink!

You drink everything except for lantern oil, don't you?

L: I'm sorry for my behavior

Page 008
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Title: Wild larvae/grub
Panel 1
Box: You got bee larvae/grubs!

sfx: tattarataaa

sfx next to bee larvae: smile

Panel 2
M: Huh? In that bottle is only one, how are you supposed to use it eight times?

L: Ah,

Let me show you.....

Panel 3
L: You take it like this....

and then....

sfx: pinch

Panel 4
sfx: pinch

??-Text bubble: Gyaaaaaa

Page 9
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Title: Nature's Wisdom
Panel 1
Spirit: Oh, courageous hero

The Tears of Light you have collected returned me to my original form

sfx: Oooooh!!

Panel 2&3
Faaaaaaaa....

Panel 4
Faron: My name is Faron....

L: Uhm..... wait......

There seems.... misun.... (misunderstanding)

F: My name if Faron... collect the Tears of Light in Hyrule

Artist's note: I still love those two! 

Rina's Translator's Note: These two were the mascots of the expo in 2005 in Aichi, Japan (Melora: I would add this to the page, even I didn't know this and it would have been confusing without the note)

Page 010
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Title: Unwelcome Actions
Panel 1
Great Fairy: As you made it this far again, let me once again reward you with Fairy Tears

sfx: Here you go

Panel 2
L: Uhm...

L: Let me give this to you as a thanks for always being so kind

Panel 3
GF: Oh,

I'm happy! what is it?

L: Chuchu jelly!

GF: ...?

But why that...?

Panel 4
L:I've heard that gelatin is good for hanging chest /breasts (sagging breasts? lol)

sfx: BANG!

Artist's note: I always wondered what happened to her being topless when she gets older

Page 011
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Title: Unexpected
Panel 1
Strong.
(Press B to attack)

Panel 2
Convenient.
(Sense)

Panel 3
Fast.
sfx: da~~sh

Panel 4
M: Hey, are you fine being like that!?

...why do I even bother asking

sfx: afternoon nap

You must be kidding!

Author's note: Being a dog must be nice.

Page 012
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Title: I'm really glad I met you
Panel 1
A monster appeared!

sfx: Kyaaaa

It'll eat us!

It'll kill us!

Run away!

sfx: Uwaaah

sfx: Gyaaa

Panel 2
T: A wolf! A wolf appeared!

No, it's a.....

T: A monster! Everyone, inside your homes!

Panel 3
Coro: Oh,

here you are again, you're really smart

sfx: stroke stroke

Coro: Poor thing, not easy when everyone is scared of you

Panel 4
L: Ah.....

I only want to be hugged by that oil selling guy.....

sfx: crush/in love

M: The probability of him falling in love with you is more likely with the light spirit's saved from their crisis

Page 013
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Title: Play/Do as you like/wish
Panel 1
Princess Zelda Princess Midna
Ilia

Panel 2
Agitha, Hena, Iza
And of course the buxom Telma

Panel 3
Beth: Say Link, you have met so many people, by which standard do you choose a girl?

small note next to Beth: Adolescent Beth-chan

Link: Mmh?

Let's see...

Panel 4
Link: A fertile girl who gives a lot of milk would be nice

sfx: hahahahaha

Beth: Impossible....! He's an unrefined goat keeper to start with! (Goatherd is the technical term for a person who takes care of goats- either would work.)

Artist note: He somehow likes goats

Page 014
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Title: The two chosen
Panel 1
Beth: At least answer this question!

Out of these two, Princess Midna and Princess Zelda, which one is your type?

Small next to Beth: Decide! Which of these two beauties! is it!!

Link: Mmh.. let me think...

Panel 2
sfx: Groooooooo

sfx: Ooaaahh...

Link: .........................

Next to Beth: Tell me! Tell me!

Panel 3
Link: Ehm, their social status is too high, I probably prefer Beth's type the best

sfx: ha..haha..haha...

Beth: Oh...! You charmer!

sfx: Awwww

Box: There was no way for him to escape this.

Artist note: Men are just like this (...)

Page 015
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Title: The Incident
Panel 1
Major Bo: What! You say the children... and the goron tribe are...!!

Major Bo: ...I see

In that case the time has come for me to teach you a secret...

Panel 2
Link: This.. this here is...?

Major Bo: Are you ready Link?

Swear to keep this place and what is going to happen now a secret

Link: ... I swear/Yes

Panel 3
Major Bo: Gggggoood! The..the..then take off your clothes.....!

sfx: Haa haa (hard breathing)

sfx: Gah!

sfx: Haa haa (hard breathing)

Artists note: Request for self-defense by law!!

Page 016
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Title: The Incident, 2
Panel 1
Shad: What!?

You went to the City in the Sky!?

Panel 2 (OMG, apologies to the editor- this is going to be insane! Just use your best judgement if you need to edit the text down)
Shad: Uwaaah! It really exists! The city in the Sky does really exists..! wow!

Say, what kind of place is it? The sky people? The buildings? The geology?!

Shad: C..Ca..Can I go, too....!?

sfx: ooooooooh

Link: I suppose it's impossible for.. general/ordinary/common/normal people... (I think I personally like ordinary the most for this.)

Shad: I.is..is that so? You don't just say without reason, do you?

Aaa, this is a dilemma can't stop my excitement...!

I'm so curious, so curious! Ah, right, so I just have to ask you many questions! Can't help it! Where should I begin, what should I ask!? What to do what to do what to do

Rina's note to the editor: Just fill this speech bubble up with his totally pointless rambling. Just make it smaller towards the end and end in the middle of a sentence :)

Panel 3
Shad: That's right!

I won't let you go home tonight!

sfx: Gah

Artist's Note: After investigation the assaulted was found having a grudge against the defendant (Shad having a grudge against Link for having been to the City to the Sky...)

Page 017
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Title: Save once before fighting a boss
Panel 1
With a weapon from ancient times he fights a decisive battle with Stallord who was woken from his deep slumber

on the execution grounds in a desert of a blood stained history

Panel 2
With a solid sound of the fragile crumbling neck the battle is won

But what lays waiting before him

is the sages' wish

A new truth will now be revealed

Panel 3
Midna: Link..!

We'll now get to the Mirror Chamber! Let's hurry....!

Panel 4
sfx: Uwah

Link: Al~right!

Let's reset and fight one more time!

sfx: It'll be fun!!!

Midna: You stupid mutt..!!

Artist note: I also played the City in the Sky many times... the next boss is just too much fun

Page 018
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Title: The Man in the Lake
Panel 1
sfx: splash

sfx: Huah (sound of getting air after getting out of water)

Panel 2
sfx: Uwah

Link: Even though I'm wearing the Zora tunic it's terrible cold at dawn

sfx: smacking sound here

Midna: Then just take it off

Link: But I'll return soon anyway so changing is too troublesome

Panel 3
Link: Why is there a temple in the water to begin with?

sfx: more smacking sounds

Midna: Complain as much as you like

small: It's not that you have to return here

sfx: stare

Panel 4
A few days later....

On the poster:
    Beware of this!!

    Long head tail
    sticking out eyes
    body: scales
    back: spikes
    feet: webs
    water puddles

    Kakariko Village

Link: What! A new twilight beast!

small: I can't forgive you, Zant!!

Midna: No.. I think that is...

Page 019
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A Man's Limit
Panel 1
Ralis: We, the Zora race, once had a similar shape like the fish have

Oh, and according to my ancestors records a princess once married a hero

Maybe Link and I have similar ancestors along the line

Panel 2
Ralis: Though if that would be true I'd be really happy

Related to so many humans! Unbelievable!

But...

Panel 3
Box: Fish Mating

First the female fish lays eggs

Later, the male fish scatters his sperm/seed on the eggs

Panel 4
Link: What incredible ancestors!! 

sfx: grip

Next to OoT Link: hahaha

Did you call?

Artist note: Most obviously Ocarina of Time's Link
(Melora: OMG XD that's awful, lol!)

Page 020
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Title: Come to think of it, they never met
Panel 1
Midna: Prin...

Princess....

Panel 2
Zelda: Midna, I wanted to meet you

Panel 3
Zelda: But

Panel 4
Zelda: Who is that dirty-looking young man? (she says 'boy'- but that sounds a little bit too rude for me)

small: Casually entering Hyrule Castle without permission. Unforgivable!

Link's sfx: nonchalant

Midna: Princess...

Artist's note: This time Link and Zelda didn't have much interaction....

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Crimson eyes of darkness, azure eyes of the sky

Page 023
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Panel 1
In Twilight, there is a legend passed down from generation to generation about a blue-eyed beast

...that no one believes

Panel 2
I didn't believe that he would actually appear

But

He took the holy sword and fulfilled the legend

But still I didn't

Panel 3
acknowledge him as the savior of the world

sfx: drip

Page 024
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Panel 1
Midna: A raindrop

Panel 2
Link: It is

But with so little we should be.......

ok

Panel 3
sfx: sound of heavy downpour

M/L: .........

Panel 4
sfx: more rain

Panel 5
Midna: Geez.....

Link, you're so counterproductive by jinxing everything

Panel 6
Link: Haha, stop complaining

We found our resting spot early today, so what?

Midna: ...good thing you have such a carefree attitude and luck

Page 025
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Panel 1
Link: But I don't dislike the rain (and get a baad mood) (I'm confused by this line of text)

If there's no rain no animals or food could grow

Cheer up a little

Midna: .....

You really ARE carefree

Link: But look take a look, the sky over there is bright so it's only a short rain shower

It'll clear up soon

Panel 2
Midna: For some reason I can't really trust what you're saying......

Link: Ahaha, but it's true

and if we're lucky

Panel 3
Link: Maybe we can

even see a rainbow

Panel 4&5
His carefreeness and my-pace attitude never changes

I wonder if he understands the danger the world is in.....

Panel 5
Midna: I don't care

Midna: I'll tell you something Link

Page 026
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Panel 1
Midna: I probably 

won't be able to see this world's rainbows

Panel 2
Link: ..huh?

Panel 4
Midna: You haven't forgotten, have you?

We, who live in the Twilight Realm, have been driven from this world of light

Midna: Just take a look at me and you'll understand that we're not suitable for light

The light is strong even now, so of course we have difficulties

Midna: These eyes of darkness cannot

appreciate the beauty of such moments in the light world

Page 027
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Panel 2
Link: Excuse me Midna,

don't move and

Link: close your eyes

Panel 3
Midna: Link...?

Link: What do you see?

Midna: I What..? I don't see anything

Link: Yeah, that's true

Now try to

Panel 4
Imagine any color you like Midna

Just like a bridge, floating like a aurora

Panel 5
Midna: ......

Page 028
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Panel 1
This instruction rings in behind my closed eyes

I'm used to the darkness but this warmth

....I don't know

Panel 3
Link: Did you see, Midna?

Panel 4
Link: That's a rainbow

Your own, very best rainbow of the world

Page 029
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Panel 1
Link: Each person has their own favorite color

No one sees it the same 

Link: You may have been punished by the Gods

Panel 3
Link: Even though

I don't think there's anything to be offended by

Link: The existence of a rainbow is so vague is can be born in anyone's heart

Page 030
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Panel 1
Link: No matter if your rainbow is different from this world's

There surely isn't any difference in the beauty of it

Panel 2
Link: Oh,

I wonder what the rainbow of Twilight looks like

Panel 2&3
Link: One day I'd like to see it

Panel 4
Midna: This color, which was engulfed in darkness

is now strongly spreading out 

Panel 5
Link: Oh, look!

It already cleared up!

Page 031
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Panel 1
Link: Hey,

Midna

Panel 1&2
Midna: and piercing through hidden fear and hesitation

Panel 2
Link: Let's go and get your rainbow back!

Midna: Those azure eyes in front of me

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Legends
Prophecies 
I don't believe in them

But if

He is the beast the passed down stories speak of

or even if he isn't

I want to go on with him together

---Cavalier---
Page 004
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Panel 1
Link, the chosen hero traveled seven years through time, his sword held high in sworn duty to Princess Zelda

In order to save the land and people he loved, he took up the Ocarina of Time and thus began his legend

His quest brought light to both past and future, and hanging in the balance was theTriforce

Opposing him at every turn was Ganondorf, with his twisted dreams to lead the world to ruin

Since the days of Ocarina of Time, many hundred years have passed

And again, a sacred hero is starting a new legend....!

Panel 2
....or at least that's what they say.

A mysterious girl and a weird dog strolling playfully around: Twilight Princess

sfx: Let's go!!

sfx: woff woff

And the more you think about it, the more you'll like it.

Page 005
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Title: Broke
Panel 1
L: Huh, I didn't realize I had hardly any rupees left

I wanted to buy some items, but collecting rupees is such a pain....

M: What about the rupee treasure chests still left in the dungeons

How about getting those? Definitely less tiring than cutting grass

Panel 2
L: Oh!

You're right!

M: I still remember where they are- let's go!

L: Right behind you!

Panel 3
And so they went to a dungeon

and quickly found a chest

sfx: clack

L: I wonder how many rupees...!

...Huh

Panel 4
You found the dungeon map

sfx: dadadadaaa da dadadaaa

M: Oh?

small at bottom: That happened to me already three times

Page 006
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Title: Unfaithful Behavior (I don't know that word?)
Panel 1
M: Hey, why are you wearing the magic armor?

L: You know, I've collected so many rupees...

In order to reduce them I decided to run around in it for a while

Panel 2
L: uwah

sfx: boing

sfx: NEIGH!

Panel 3
M: Strange, the effect shouldn't have worn off, yet you can't move....

L: Maybe she isn't feeling fine?

M: Possibly he armor is too heavy for her?

Panel 4
E: I don't remember training this child

E: to spend his money so carelessly!

Artist-small: For me, Epona is like a mother figure to Link

Page 007
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Title: Swelling/Undulation
Panel 1
Box: Chuchu jelly

sfx: gulp gulp gulp

sfx: Uwah... (by Midna)

M: You really drink a lot of that stuff Link...

Panel 2
L: It tastes surprisingly good and its healthy too

M: No, I actually meant how you're feeling....

Cavalier Note: Not sure what this means.

L: Except for lantern oil, I put everything edible into it

And I think the faeries are just absorbed

M: Mmh.....

Panel 3
Box: Worms

sfx in background: swell (like dizzy?)

Big text: In order to preserve your well-being, this scene will be shown in mosaic

Panel 4
M: Hey, get up and drink!

You drink everything except for lantern oil, don't you?

L: Sorry!

Page 008
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Title: Wild larvae/grub
Panel 1
Box: You got bee larvae/grubs!

sfx: tattarataaa

sfx next to bee larvae: smile

Panel 2
M: Huh? In that bottle is only one, how are you supposed to use it eight times?

L: Ah,

Let me show you.....

Panel 3
L: You take it like this....

and then....

sfx: pinch

Panel 4
sfx: pinch

??-Text bubble: Gyaaaaaa

Page 9
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Title: Nature's Wisdom
Panel 1
Spirit: Oh, courageous hero

The Tears of Light you have collected have returned me to my original form

sfx: Oooooh!!

Panel 2&3
Faaaaaaaa....

Panel 4
Faron: My name is Faron....

L: Uhm..... wait......

There seems to be some.... misunderstanding.... 

F: My name is Faron... collect the Tears of Light in Hyrule

Artist's note: I still love those two! 

Note: These two were the mascots of the expo in 2005 in Aichi, Japan

Page 010
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Title: Unwelcome Actions
Panel 1
Great Fairy: As you made it this far again, let me once again reward you with Fairy Tears

sfx: Here you go

Panel 2
L: Uhm...

L: Let me give this to you as a thanks for always being so kind

Panel 3
GF: Oh,

I'm happy! what is it?

L: Chuchu jelly!

GF: ...?

But why that...?

Panel 4
L:I've heard that gelatin is good for sagging breasts!

sfx: BANG!

Artist's note: I always wondered what happened to her being topless when she gets older

Page 011
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Title: Unexpected
Panel 1
Strong.
(Press B to attack)

Panel 2
Convenient.
(Sense)

Panel 3
Fast.
sfx: da~~sh

Panel 4
M: How can you live like this?

...why do I even bother asking

sfx: SNORE!

This is ridiculous!

Author's note: Being a dog must be nice.

Page 012
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Title: I'm really glad I met you
Panel 1
A monster appeared!

sfx: Kyaaaa

It'll eat us!

It'll kill us!

Run away!

sfx: Uwaaah

sfx: Gyaaa

Panel 2
T: A wolf! A wolf appeared!

No, it's a.....

T: A monster! Everyone, inside your homes!

Panel 3
Coro: Oh,

Oh its you again! You're really smart

sfx: stroke stroke

Coro: Poor thing, its not easy when everyone is scared of you

Panel 4
L: Ah.....

I only want to be hugged by that oil selling guy.....

sfx: crush/in love

M: He's more likely to fall in love with you if you'd save the Spirits of Light!

Page 013
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Title: Play/Do as you wish
Panel 1
Princess Zelda Princess Midna
Ilia

Panel 2
Agitha, Hena, Iza
And of course the buxom Telma

Panel 3
Beth: Say Link, you have met so many women, what are your standards for choosing a girl?

small note next to Beth: Adolescent Beth-chan

Link: Mmh?

Let's see...

Panel 4
Link: A fertile girl who gives a lot of milk would be nice

sfx: hahahahaha

Beth: Impossible....! What can you expect from a goat shepard!?

Artist note: He somehow likes goats

Page 014
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Title: The two chosen
Panel 1
Beth: At least answer this question!

Out of these two, Princess Midna and Princess Zelda, which one is your type?

Small next to Beth: Decide! Which of these two beauties is it?!?!?!

Link: Hmmm... let me think...

Panel 2
sfx: Groooooooo

sfx: Ooaaahh...

Link: .........................

Next to Beth: Tell me! Tell me!

Panel 3
Link: Ehm, their social status is too high, I probably prefer a girl like Beth
sfx: ha..haha..haha...

Beth: Oh...! You charmer!

sfx: Awwww

Box: There was no way for him to escape this.

Artist note: Men are just like this (...)

Page 015
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Title: The Incident
Panel 1
Major Bo: What! You say the children... and the Goron tribe are...!!

Major Bo: ...I see

In that case the time has come for me to teach you a secret...

Panel 2
Link: This.. this here is...?

Major Bo: Are you ready Link?

Swear to keep this place and what is going to happen a secret

Link: ... I promise

Panel 3
Major Bo: Gggggoood! The..the..then take off your clothes.....!

sfx: Hahahah GASP!

sfx: Gah!

sfx: GASP!

Artists note: Request for self-defense by law!!

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Title: The Incident, 2
Panel 1
Shad: What!?

You went to the City in the Sky!?

Panel 2 (OMG, apologies to the editor- this is going to be insane! Just use your best judgement if you need to edit the text down)
Shad: Uwaaah! It really exists! The city in the Sky does really exists..! wow!

Say, what kind of place is it? The sky people? The buildings? The geology?!

Shad: C..Ca..Can I go, too....!?

sfx: ooooooooh

Link: I suppose it's impossible for.. ordinary people... 

Shad: Is...is..is that so? You don't just say that without reason, do you?

Aaa, this is a dilemma! I can't stop my excitement...!

I'm so curious, so curious! Ah, right, so I just have to ask you many questions! I can't help it! Where should I begin, what should I ask!? What to do what to do what to do

Rina's note to the editor: Just fill this speech bubble up with his totally pointless rambling. Just make it smaller towards the end and end in the middle of a sentence :)

Panel 3
Shad: That's right!

I won't let you go home tonight!

sfx: Gah

Artist's Note: After investigation the assaulted was found having a grudge against the defendant 

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Title: Save once before fighting a boss
Panel 1
With a weapon from ancient times he fights a decisive battle with Stallord who was woken from his deep slumber

on the execution grounds in a desert of a blood stained history

Panel 2
With the sound of his fragile neck crumbling the battle is won

But what lies waiting before him

is the sages' wish

A new truth will now be revealed

Panel 3
Midna: Link..!

We have to get to the Mirror Chamber! Let's hurry....!

Panel 4
sfx: Uwah

Link: Al~right!

Let's reset and fight one more time!

sfx: It'll be fun!!!

Midna: You stupid mutt..!!

Artist note: I also played the City in the Sky many times... the next boss is just too much fun

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Title: The Man in the Lake
Panel 1
sfx: splash

sfx: GASP!

Panel 2
sfx: Uwah

Link: Even though I'm wearing the Zora tunic it's terribly cold at dawn

sfx: SMACK!

Midna: Then just take it off

Link: But I'll be coming back soon anyway so changing my tunic would just be annoying

Panel 3
Link: Why is there a temple underwater anyway?

sfx: more smacking sounds

Midna: Complain as much as you like

small: you don't have to come back

sfx: stare

Panel 4
A few days later....

On the poster:
    Beware of this!!

    Long head tail
    sticking out eyes
    body: scales
    back: spikes
    feet: webs
    water puddles

    Kakariko Village

Link: What! A new twilight beast!

small: I can't forgive you, Zant!!

Midna: No.. I think that is...

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A Man's Limit
Panel 1
Ralis: We, the Zora race, once had a shape similar

Oh, and according to my ancestors records a princess once married a hero

Maybe Link and I have similar ancestors along the line

Panel 2
Ralis: If thats true, I'd be so happy 

to be related to so many humans! Unbelievable!

But...

Panel 3
Box: Fish Mating

First the female fish lays eggs

Later, the male fish scatters his seed on the eggs

Panel 4
Link: What incredible ancestors!! 

sfx: grip

Next to OoT Link: hahaha

Did you call?

Artist note: Most obviously Ocarina of Time's Link

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Title: Come to think of it, they never met
Panel 1
Midna: Prin...

Princess....

Panel 2
Zelda: Midna, I wanted to meet you

Panel 3
Zelda: But

Panel 4
Zelda: Who is that dirty-looking young man? 

small: Casually entering Hyrule Castle without permission. Unforgivable!

Link's sfx: nonchalant

Midna: Princess...

Artist's note: This time Link and Zelda didn't have much interaction....

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Crimson eyes of darkness, azure eyes of the sky

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Panel 1
In Twilight, there is a legend passed down from generation to generation about a blue-eyed beast

...that no one believes

Panel 2
I didn't believe that he would actually appear

But

He took the holy sword and fulfilled the legend

But still I didn't

Panel 3
acknowledge him as the savior of the world

sfx: drip

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Panel 1
Midna: A raindrop

Panel 2
Link: Yep...

But with so little rain we should be.......

ok

Panel 3
sfx: SHHHH!!!!
M/L: .........

Panel 4
sfx: SHHHHH!!!!

Panel 5
Midna: Geez.....

Link, you're so counterproductive. You've jinxed everything

Panel 6
Link: Haha, stop complaining

We found our resting spot early today, so what?

Midna: ...good thing you have such good luck and a carefree attitude 

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Panel 1
Link: But I don't dislike the rain ]

If there's no rain no animals or food couldn't survive

So cheer up!

Midna: .....

You really ARE carefree

Link: But look take a look, the sky over there is bright so it's only a short rain shower

It'll clear up soon

Panel 2
Midna: For some reason I can't really trust what you're saying......

Link: Ahaha, but it's true

and if we're lucky

Panel 3
Link: Maybe we can

even see a rainbow

Panel 4&5
His carefree attitude never changes

I wonder if he understands the danger the world is in.....

Panel 5
Midna: I don't care

Midna: I'll tell you something Link

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Panel 1
Midna: I probably 

won't be able to see this world's rainbows

Panel 2
Link: ..huh?

Panel 4
Midna: You haven't forgotten, have you?

We, who live in the Twilight Realm, have been driven from this world of light

Midna: Just take a look at me and you'll understand that we're not suitable for light

The light is strong even now, so of course we have difficulties

Midna: These eyes of darkness cannot

appreciate the beauty of such moments in the world of light

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Panel 2
Link: Excuse me Midna,

don't move and

Link: close your eyes

Panel 3
Midna: Link...?

Link: What do you see?

Midna: I What..? I don't see anything

Link: Yeah, that's true

Now try to

Panel 4
Imagine any color you like Midna

Just like a bridge, floating like an aurora

Panel 5
Midna: ......

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Panel 1
This instruction rings in behind my closed eyes
Cavalier Note: Note sure what this means.

I'm used to the darkness but this warmth

....I don't know

Panel 3
Link: Did you see, Midna?

Panel 4
Link: That's a rainbow

Its all yours, the most beautiful rainbow in the world

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Panel 1
Link: Each person has their own favorite color

No one sees it the same way

Link: You may have been punished by the Gods

Panel 3
Link: But even still

I don't think there's any reason to be sad

Link: A rainbow can be born in anyone's heart

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Panel 1
Link: No matter if that rainbow is different from this world's

There surely isn't any difference in the beauty of it

Panel 2
Link: Oh,

I wonder what the rainbow of Twilight looks like

Panel 2&3
Link: One day I'd like to see it

Panel 4
Midna: This color, which was engulfed in darkness

is now strongly spreading out 

Panel 5
Link: Oh, look!

It already cleared up!

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Panel 1
Link: Hey,

Midna

Panel 1&2
Midna: and piercing through hidden fear and hesitation

Panel 2
Link: Let's go and get your rainbow back!

Midna: Those azure eyes in front of me

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Legends
Prophecies 
I don't believe in them

But if

He may be the beast of legend spoken of in the ancient stories

but even if he isn't

I want to go on with him together[/quote]

Cavalier: Thats my first draft. Let me know what you guys think.


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