(Last Edited: 2012/9/21)
This is for the Japanese to English Language Version:
Work force:
Extra Notes:
This is for the Japanese to English Language Version:
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Work force:
- Translator: Rina (Rinael)
Editor: Cephae Melora
Localization: Cavalier
Scanned by: Melora
Extra Notes:
- * Credit Rina as Rinael on the tags
---Rina---
Melora here: I'm just posting this and then transferring it over to Rina. She's been busy so this came over email. I'll be right back to edit it a bit 
I put Rina's notes in this color of blue.
Page 004
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Panel 1
The chosen hero Link travels through seven years of time, holding the master sword high to the oath he made to Princess Zelda
In order to save the country and the people he loves, he takes the Ocarina of Time and starts a legend
He advances and brings light to the future and past, and at the roots of it all, the Triforce
And stopping Ganondorf, whose distorted wish is to lead the world to ruin
Since the events of Ocarina of Time, many hundred years have passed
And again, a sacred one is starting a new legend....!
Panel 2
....or how it was supposed to be.
A mysterious girl and dog strolling around playfully: Twilight Princess
sfx: Let's go!!
sfx: woff woff
And the more you think about it, the more you like it.
Page 005
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Title: Broke
Panel 1
L: Huh, I didn't realize I hardly have any rupees left
I wanted to buy some items, but collecting rupees is so troublesome....
M: What about the rupee treasure chests still left in the dungeons
How about getting these? Definitely less tiring than cutting grass
Panel 2
L: Oh!
You're right!
M: I still remember where, so let's go!
L: Gotcha!
Panel 3
And so they went to a dungeon
and quickly found a chest
sfx: clack
L: I wonder how many rupees...!
...Huh
Panel 4
You found the dungeon map
sfx: dadadadaaa da dadadaaa
M: Oh?
small at bottom: That happened to me already three times
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Title: Unfilial Behavior (I don't know that word?)
Panel 1
M: Hey, why are you wearing the magic armor?
L: You know, I've collected so many rupees...
In order to reduce them I decided to move around in it for a while
Panel 2
L: uwah
sfx: boing
sfx: sound of a horse (Neigh?)
Panel 3
M: Strange, the effect shouldn't have worn off, yet you can't move....
L: Maybe she isn't feeling fine?
M: Possibly he armor is too rugged for her?
Panel 4
E: I don't remember raising a child
E: who is spending money so carelessly!
Artist-small: For me, Epona is like a mother figure to Link
Page 007
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Title: Swelling/Undulation
Panel 1
Box: Chuchu jelly
sfx: gulp gulp gulp
sfx: Uwah... (by Midna)
M: You really drink that often, Link...
Panel 2
L: It tastes surprisingly good and is healthy
M: No, I actually meant how you're feeling....
L: Except for lantern oil, I put everything edible into it
And I think faeries are just absorbed
M: Mmh.....
Panel 3
Box: Worms
sfx in background: swell (like dizzy?)
Big text: In order to preserve your well-being, this scene will be shown in mosaic
Panel 4
M: Hey, get up and drink!
You drink everything except for lantern oil, don't you?
L: I'm sorry for my behavior
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Title: Wild larvae/grub
Panel 1
Box: You got bee larvae/grubs!
sfx: tattarataaa
sfx next to bee larvae: smile
Panel 2
M: Huh? In that bottle is only one, how are you supposed to use it eight times?
L: Ah,
Let me show you.....
Panel 3
L: You take it like this....
and then....
sfx: pinch
Panel 4
sfx: pinch
??-Text bubble: Gyaaaaaa
Page 9
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Title: Nature's Wisdom
Panel 1
Spirit: Oh, courageous hero
The Tears of Light you have collected returned me to my original form
sfx: Oooooh!!
Panel 2&3
Faaaaaaaa....
Panel 4
Faron: My name is Faron....
L: Uhm..... wait......
There seems.... misun.... (misunderstanding)
F: My name if Faron... collect the Tears of Light in Hyrule
Artist's note: I still love those two!
Rina's Translator's Note: These two were the mascots of the expo in 2005 in Aichi, Japan (Melora: I would add this to the page, even I didn't know this and it would have been confusing without the note)
Page 010
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Title: Unwelcome Actions
Panel 1
Great Fairy: As you made it this far again, let me once again reward you with Fairy Tears
sfx: Here you go
Panel 2
L: Uhm...
L: Let me give this to you as a thanks for always being so kind
Panel 3
GF: Oh,
I'm happy! what is it?
L: Chuchu jelly!
GF: ...?
But why that...?
Panel 4
L:I've heard that gelatin is good for hanging chest /breasts (sagging breasts? lol)
sfx: BANG!
Artist's note: I always wondered what happened to her being topless when she gets older
Page 011
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Title: Unexpected
Panel 1
Strong.
(Press B to attack)
Panel 2
Convenient.
(Sense)
Panel 3
Fast.
sfx: da~~sh
Panel 4
M: Hey, are you fine being like that!?
...why do I even bother asking
sfx: afternoon nap
You must be kidding!
Author's note: Being a dog must be nice.
Page 012
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Title: I'm really glad I met you
Panel 1
A monster appeared!
sfx: Kyaaaa
It'll eat us!
It'll kill us!
Run away!
sfx: Uwaaah
sfx: Gyaaa
Panel 2
T: A wolf! A wolf appeared!
No, it's a.....
T: A monster! Everyone, inside your homes!
Panel 3
Coro: Oh,
here you are again, you're really smart
sfx: stroke stroke
Coro: Poor thing, not easy when everyone is scared of you
Panel 4
L: Ah.....
I only want to be hugged by that oil selling guy.....
sfx: crush/in love
M: The probability of him falling in love with you is more likely with the light spirit's saved from their crisis
Page 013
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Title: Play/Do as you like/wish
Panel 1
Princess Zelda Princess Midna
Ilia
Panel 2
Agitha, Hena, Iza
And of course the buxom Telma
Panel 3
Beth: Say Link, you have met so many people, by which standard do you choose a girl?
small note next to Beth: Adolescent Beth-chan
Link: Mmh?
Let's see...
Panel 4
Link: A fertile girl who gives a lot of milk would be nice
sfx: hahahahaha
Beth: Impossible....! He's an unrefined goat keeper to start with! (Goatherd is the technical term for a person who takes care of goats- either would work.)
Artist note: He somehow likes goats
Page 014
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Title: The two chosen
Panel 1
Beth: At least answer this question!
Out of these two, Princess Midna and Princess Zelda, which one is your type?
Small next to Beth: Decide! Which of these two beauties! is it!!
Link: Mmh.. let me think...
Panel 2
sfx: Groooooooo
sfx: Ooaaahh...
Link: .........................
Next to Beth: Tell me! Tell me!
Panel 3
Link: Ehm, their social status is too high, I probably prefer Beth's type the best
sfx: ha..haha..haha...
Beth: Oh...! You charmer!
sfx: Awwww
Box: There was no way for him to escape this.
Artist note: Men are just like this (...)
Page 015
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Title: The Incident
Panel 1
Major Bo: What! You say the children... and the goron tribe are...!!
Major Bo: ...I see
In that case the time has come for me to teach you a secret...
Panel 2
Link: This.. this here is...?
Major Bo: Are you ready Link?
Swear to keep this place and what is going to happen now a secret
Link: ... I swear/Yes
Panel 3
Major Bo: Gggggoood! The..the..then take off your clothes.....!
sfx: Haa haa (hard breathing)
sfx: Gah!
sfx: Haa haa (hard breathing)
Artists note: Request for self-defense by law!!
Page 016
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Title: The Incident, 2
Panel 1
Shad: What!?
You went to the City in the Sky!?
Panel 2 (OMG, apologies to the editor- this is going to be insane! Just use your best judgement if you need to edit the text down)
Shad: Uwaaah! It really exists! The city in the Sky does really exists..! wow!
Say, what kind of place is it? The sky people? The buildings? The geology?!
Shad: C..Ca..Can I go, too....!?
sfx: ooooooooh
Link: I suppose it's impossible for.. general/ordinary/common/normal people... (I think I personally like ordinary the most for this.)
Shad: I.is..is that so? You don't just say without reason, do you?
Aaa, this is a dilemma can't stop my excitement...!
I'm so curious, so curious! Ah, right, so I just have to ask you many questions! Can't help it! Where should I begin, what should I ask!? What to do what to do what to do
Rina's note to the editor: Just fill this speech bubble up with his totally pointless rambling. Just make it smaller towards the end and end in the middle of a sentence
Panel 3
Shad: That's right!
I won't let you go home tonight!
sfx: Gah
Artist's Note: After investigation the assaulted was found having a grudge against the defendant (Shad having a grudge against Link for having been to the City to the Sky...)
Page 017
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Title: Save once before fighting a boss
Panel 1
With a weapon from ancient times he fights a decisive battle with Stallord who was woken from his deep slumber
on the execution grounds in a desert of a blood stained history
Panel 2
With a solid sound of the fragile crumbling neck the battle is won
But what lays waiting before him
is the sages' wish
A new truth will now be revealed
Panel 3
Midna: Link..!
We'll now get to the Mirror Chamber! Let's hurry....!
Panel 4
sfx: Uwah
Link: Al~right!
Let's reset and fight one more time!
sfx: It'll be fun!!!
Midna: You stupid mutt..!!
Artist note: I also played the City in the Sky many times... the next boss is just too much fun
Page 018
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Title: The Man in the Lake
Panel 1
sfx: splash
sfx: Huah (sound of getting air after getting out of water)
Panel 2
sfx: Uwah
Link: Even though I'm wearing the Zora tunic it's terrible cold at dawn
sfx: smacking sound here
Midna: Then just take it off
Link: But I'll return soon anyway so changing is too troublesome
Panel 3
Link: Why is there a temple in the water to begin with?
sfx: more smacking sounds
Midna: Complain as much as you like
small: It's not that you have to return here
sfx: stare
Panel 4
A few days later....
On the poster:
Link: What! A new twilight beast!
small: I can't forgive you, Zant!!
Midna: No.. I think that is...
Page 019
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A Man's Limit
Panel 1
Ralis: We, the Zora race, once had a similar shape like the fish have
Oh, and according to my ancestors records a princess once married a hero
Maybe Link and I have similar ancestors along the line
Panel 2
Ralis: Though if that would be true I'd be really happy
Related to so many humans! Unbelievable!
But...
Panel 3
Box: Fish Mating
First the female fish lays eggs
Later, the male fish scatters his sperm/seed on the eggs
Panel 4
Link: What incredible ancestors!!
sfx: grip
Next to OoT Link: hahaha
Did you call?
Artist note: Most obviously Ocarina of Time's Link
(Melora: OMG
that's awful, lol!)
Page 020
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Title: Come to think of it, they never met
Panel 1
Midna: Prin...
Princess....
Panel 2
Zelda: Midna, I wanted to meet you
Panel 3
Zelda: But
Panel 4
Zelda: Who is that dirty-looking young man? (she says 'boy'- but that sounds a little bit too rude for me)
small: Casually entering Hyrule Castle without permission. Unforgivable!
Link's sfx: nonchalant
Midna: Princess...
Artist's note: This time Link and Zelda didn't have much interaction....
Page 022
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Crimson eyes of darkness, azure eyes of the sky
Page 023
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Panel 1
In Twilight, there is a legend passed down from generation to generation about a blue-eyed beast
...that no one believes
Panel 2
I didn't believe that he would actually appear
But
He took the holy sword and fulfilled the legend
But still I didn't
Panel 3
acknowledge him as the savior of the world
sfx: drip
Page 024
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Panel 1
Midna: A raindrop
Panel 2
Link: It is
But with so little we should be.......
ok
Panel 3
sfx: sound of heavy downpour
M/L: .........
Panel 4
sfx: more rain
Panel 5
Midna: Geez.....
Link, you're so counterproductive by jinxing everything
Panel 6
Link: Haha, stop complaining
We found our resting spot early today, so what?
Midna: ...good thing you have such a carefree attitude and luck
Page 025
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Panel 1
Link: But I don't dislike the rain (and get a baad mood) (I'm confused by this line of text)
If there's no rain no animals or food could grow
Cheer up a little
Midna: .....
You really ARE carefree
Link: But look take a look, the sky over there is bright so it's only a short rain shower
It'll clear up soon
Panel 2
Midna: For some reason I can't really trust what you're saying......
Link: Ahaha, but it's true
and if we're lucky
Panel 3
Link: Maybe we can
even see a rainbow
Panel 4&5
His carefreeness and my-pace attitude never changes
I wonder if he understands the danger the world is in.....
Panel 5
Midna: I don't care
Midna: I'll tell you something Link
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Panel 1
Midna: I probably
won't be able to see this world's rainbows
Panel 2
Link: ..huh?
Panel 4
Midna: You haven't forgotten, have you?
We, who live in the Twilight Realm, have been driven from this world of light
Midna: Just take a look at me and you'll understand that we're not suitable for light
The light is strong even now, so of course we have difficulties
Midna: These eyes of darkness cannot
appreciate the beauty of such moments in the light world
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Panel 2
Link: Excuse me Midna,
don't move and
Link: close your eyes
Panel 3
Midna: Link...?
Link: What do you see?
Midna: I What..? I don't see anything
Link: Yeah, that's true
Now try to
Panel 4
Imagine any color you like Midna
Just like a bridge, floating like a aurora
Panel 5
Midna: ......
Page 028
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Panel 1
This instruction rings in behind my closed eyes
I'm used to the darkness but this warmth
....I don't know
Panel 3
Link: Did you see, Midna?
Panel 4
Link: That's a rainbow
Your own, very best rainbow of the world
Page 029
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Panel 1
Link: Each person has their own favorite color
No one sees it the same
Link: You may have been punished by the Gods
Panel 3
Link: Even though
I don't think there's anything to be offended by
Link: The existence of a rainbow is so vague is can be born in anyone's heart
Page 030
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Panel 1
Link: No matter if your rainbow is different from this world's
There surely isn't any difference in the beauty of it
Panel 2
Link: Oh,
I wonder what the rainbow of Twilight looks like
Panel 2&3
Link: One day I'd like to see it
Panel 4
Midna: This color, which was engulfed in darkness
is now strongly spreading out
Panel 5
Link: Oh, look!
It already cleared up!
Page 031
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Panel 1
Link: Hey,
Midna
Panel 1&2
Midna: and piercing through hidden fear and hesitation
Panel 2
Link: Let's go and get your rainbow back!
Midna: Those azure eyes in front of me
Page 032
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Legends
Prophecies
I don't believe in them
But if
He is the beast the passed down stories speak of
or even if he isn't
I want to go on with him together
I put Rina's notes in this color of blue.Page 004
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Panel 1
The chosen hero Link travels through seven years of time, holding the master sword high to the oath he made to Princess Zelda
In order to save the country and the people he loves, he takes the Ocarina of Time and starts a legend
He advances and brings light to the future and past, and at the roots of it all, the Triforce
And stopping Ganondorf, whose distorted wish is to lead the world to ruin
Since the events of Ocarina of Time, many hundred years have passed
And again, a sacred one is starting a new legend....!
Panel 2
....or how it was supposed to be.
A mysterious girl and dog strolling around playfully: Twilight Princess
sfx: Let's go!!
sfx: woff woff
And the more you think about it, the more you like it.
Page 005
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Title: Broke
Panel 1
L: Huh, I didn't realize I hardly have any rupees left
I wanted to buy some items, but collecting rupees is so troublesome....
M: What about the rupee treasure chests still left in the dungeons
How about getting these? Definitely less tiring than cutting grass
Panel 2
L: Oh!
You're right!
M: I still remember where, so let's go!
L: Gotcha!
Panel 3
And so they went to a dungeon
and quickly found a chest
sfx: clack
L: I wonder how many rupees...!
...Huh
Panel 4
You found the dungeon map
sfx: dadadadaaa da dadadaaa
M: Oh?
small at bottom: That happened to me already three times
Page 006
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Title: Unfilial Behavior (I don't know that word?)
Panel 1
M: Hey, why are you wearing the magic armor?
L: You know, I've collected so many rupees...
In order to reduce them I decided to move around in it for a while
Panel 2
L: uwah
sfx: boing
sfx: sound of a horse (Neigh?)
Panel 3
M: Strange, the effect shouldn't have worn off, yet you can't move....
L: Maybe she isn't feeling fine?
M: Possibly he armor is too rugged for her?
Panel 4
E: I don't remember raising a child
E: who is spending money so carelessly!
Artist-small: For me, Epona is like a mother figure to Link
Page 007
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Title: Swelling/Undulation
Panel 1
Box: Chuchu jelly
sfx: gulp gulp gulp
sfx: Uwah... (by Midna)
M: You really drink that often, Link...
Panel 2
L: It tastes surprisingly good and is healthy
M: No, I actually meant how you're feeling....
L: Except for lantern oil, I put everything edible into it
And I think faeries are just absorbed
M: Mmh.....
Panel 3
Box: Worms
sfx in background: swell (like dizzy?)
Big text: In order to preserve your well-being, this scene will be shown in mosaic
Panel 4
M: Hey, get up and drink!
You drink everything except for lantern oil, don't you?
L: I'm sorry for my behavior
Page 008
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Title: Wild larvae/grub
Panel 1
Box: You got bee larvae/grubs!
sfx: tattarataaa
sfx next to bee larvae: smile
Panel 2
M: Huh? In that bottle is only one, how are you supposed to use it eight times?
L: Ah,
Let me show you.....
Panel 3
L: You take it like this....
and then....
sfx: pinch
Panel 4
sfx: pinch
??-Text bubble: Gyaaaaaa
Page 9
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Title: Nature's Wisdom
Panel 1
Spirit: Oh, courageous hero
The Tears of Light you have collected returned me to my original form
sfx: Oooooh!!
Panel 2&3
Faaaaaaaa....
Panel 4
Faron: My name is Faron....
L: Uhm..... wait......
There seems.... misun.... (misunderstanding)
F: My name if Faron... collect the Tears of Light in Hyrule
Artist's note: I still love those two!
Rina's Translator's Note: These two were the mascots of the expo in 2005 in Aichi, Japan (Melora: I would add this to the page, even I didn't know this and it would have been confusing without the note)
Page 010
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Title: Unwelcome Actions
Panel 1
Great Fairy: As you made it this far again, let me once again reward you with Fairy Tears
sfx: Here you go
Panel 2
L: Uhm...
L: Let me give this to you as a thanks for always being so kind
Panel 3
GF: Oh,
I'm happy! what is it?
L: Chuchu jelly!
GF: ...?
But why that...?
Panel 4
L:I've heard that gelatin is good for hanging chest /breasts (sagging breasts? lol)
sfx: BANG!
Artist's note: I always wondered what happened to her being topless when she gets older
Page 011
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Title: Unexpected
Panel 1
Strong.
(Press B to attack)
Panel 2
Convenient.
(Sense)
Panel 3
Fast.
sfx: da~~sh
Panel 4
M: Hey, are you fine being like that!?
...why do I even bother asking
sfx: afternoon nap
You must be kidding!
Author's note: Being a dog must be nice.
Page 012
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Title: I'm really glad I met you
Panel 1
A monster appeared!
sfx: Kyaaaa
It'll eat us!
It'll kill us!
Run away!
sfx: Uwaaah
sfx: Gyaaa
Panel 2
T: A wolf! A wolf appeared!
No, it's a.....
T: A monster! Everyone, inside your homes!
Panel 3
Coro: Oh,
here you are again, you're really smart
sfx: stroke stroke
Coro: Poor thing, not easy when everyone is scared of you
Panel 4
L: Ah.....
I only want to be hugged by that oil selling guy.....
sfx: crush/in love
M: The probability of him falling in love with you is more likely with the light spirit's saved from their crisis
Page 013
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Title: Play/Do as you like/wish
Panel 1
Princess Zelda Princess Midna
Ilia
Panel 2
Agitha, Hena, Iza
And of course the buxom Telma
Panel 3
Beth: Say Link, you have met so many people, by which standard do you choose a girl?
small note next to Beth: Adolescent Beth-chan
Link: Mmh?
Let's see...
Panel 4
Link: A fertile girl who gives a lot of milk would be nice
sfx: hahahahaha
Beth: Impossible....! He's an unrefined goat keeper to start with! (Goatherd is the technical term for a person who takes care of goats- either would work.)
Artist note: He somehow likes goats
Page 014
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Title: The two chosen
Panel 1
Beth: At least answer this question!
Out of these two, Princess Midna and Princess Zelda, which one is your type?
Small next to Beth: Decide! Which of these two beauties! is it!!
Link: Mmh.. let me think...
Panel 2
sfx: Groooooooo
sfx: Ooaaahh...
Link: .........................
Next to Beth: Tell me! Tell me!
Panel 3
Link: Ehm, their social status is too high, I probably prefer Beth's type the best
sfx: ha..haha..haha...
Beth: Oh...! You charmer!
sfx: Awwww
Box: There was no way for him to escape this.
Artist note: Men are just like this (...)
Page 015
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Title: The Incident
Panel 1
Major Bo: What! You say the children... and the goron tribe are...!!
Major Bo: ...I see
In that case the time has come for me to teach you a secret...
Panel 2
Link: This.. this here is...?
Major Bo: Are you ready Link?
Swear to keep this place and what is going to happen now a secret
Link: ... I swear/Yes
Panel 3
Major Bo: Gggggoood! The..the..then take off your clothes.....!
sfx: Haa haa (hard breathing)
sfx: Gah!
sfx: Haa haa (hard breathing)
Artists note: Request for self-defense by law!!
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Title: The Incident, 2
Panel 1
Shad: What!?
You went to the City in the Sky!?
Panel 2 (OMG, apologies to the editor- this is going to be insane! Just use your best judgement if you need to edit the text down)
Shad: Uwaaah! It really exists! The city in the Sky does really exists..! wow!
Say, what kind of place is it? The sky people? The buildings? The geology?!
Shad: C..Ca..Can I go, too....!?
sfx: ooooooooh
Link: I suppose it's impossible for.. general/ordinary/common/normal people... (I think I personally like ordinary the most for this.)
Shad: I.is..is that so? You don't just say without reason, do you?
Aaa, this is a dilemma can't stop my excitement...!
I'm so curious, so curious! Ah, right, so I just have to ask you many questions! Can't help it! Where should I begin, what should I ask!? What to do what to do what to do
Rina's note to the editor: Just fill this speech bubble up with his totally pointless rambling. Just make it smaller towards the end and end in the middle of a sentence
Panel 3
Shad: That's right!
I won't let you go home tonight!
sfx: Gah
Artist's Note: After investigation the assaulted was found having a grudge against the defendant (Shad having a grudge against Link for having been to the City to the Sky...)
Page 017
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Title: Save once before fighting a boss
Panel 1
With a weapon from ancient times he fights a decisive battle with Stallord who was woken from his deep slumber
on the execution grounds in a desert of a blood stained history
Panel 2
With a solid sound of the fragile crumbling neck the battle is won
But what lays waiting before him
is the sages' wish
A new truth will now be revealed
Panel 3
Midna: Link..!
We'll now get to the Mirror Chamber! Let's hurry....!
Panel 4
sfx: Uwah
Link: Al~right!
Let's reset and fight one more time!
sfx: It'll be fun!!!
Midna: You stupid mutt..!!
Artist note: I also played the City in the Sky many times... the next boss is just too much fun
Page 018
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Title: The Man in the Lake
Panel 1
sfx: splash
sfx: Huah (sound of getting air after getting out of water)
Panel 2
sfx: Uwah
Link: Even though I'm wearing the Zora tunic it's terrible cold at dawn
sfx: smacking sound here
Midna: Then just take it off
Link: But I'll return soon anyway so changing is too troublesome
Panel 3
Link: Why is there a temple in the water to begin with?
sfx: more smacking sounds
Midna: Complain as much as you like
small: It's not that you have to return here
sfx: stare
Panel 4
A few days later....
On the poster:
- Beware of this!!
Long head tail
sticking out eyes
body: scales
back: spikes
feet: webs
water puddles
Kakariko Village
Link: What! A new twilight beast!
small: I can't forgive you, Zant!!
Midna: No.. I think that is...
Page 019
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A Man's Limit
Panel 1
Ralis: We, the Zora race, once had a similar shape like the fish have
Oh, and according to my ancestors records a princess once married a hero
Maybe Link and I have similar ancestors along the line
Panel 2
Ralis: Though if that would be true I'd be really happy
Related to so many humans! Unbelievable!
But...
Panel 3
Box: Fish Mating
First the female fish lays eggs
Later, the male fish scatters his sperm/seed on the eggs
Panel 4
Link: What incredible ancestors!!
sfx: grip
Next to OoT Link: hahaha
Did you call?
Artist note: Most obviously Ocarina of Time's Link
(Melora: OMG
that's awful, lol!)Page 020
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Title: Come to think of it, they never met
Panel 1
Midna: Prin...
Princess....
Panel 2
Zelda: Midna, I wanted to meet you
Panel 3
Zelda: But
Panel 4
Zelda: Who is that dirty-looking young man? (she says 'boy'- but that sounds a little bit too rude for me)
small: Casually entering Hyrule Castle without permission. Unforgivable!
Link's sfx: nonchalant
Midna: Princess...
Artist's note: This time Link and Zelda didn't have much interaction....
Page 022
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Crimson eyes of darkness, azure eyes of the sky
Page 023
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Panel 1
In Twilight, there is a legend passed down from generation to generation about a blue-eyed beast
...that no one believes
Panel 2
I didn't believe that he would actually appear
But
He took the holy sword and fulfilled the legend
But still I didn't
Panel 3
acknowledge him as the savior of the world
sfx: drip
Page 024
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Panel 1
Midna: A raindrop
Panel 2
Link: It is
But with so little we should be.......
ok
Panel 3
sfx: sound of heavy downpour
M/L: .........
Panel 4
sfx: more rain
Panel 5
Midna: Geez.....
Link, you're so counterproductive by jinxing everything
Panel 6
Link: Haha, stop complaining
We found our resting spot early today, so what?
Midna: ...good thing you have such a carefree attitude and luck
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Panel 1
Link: But I don't dislike the rain (and get a baad mood) (I'm confused by this line of text)
If there's no rain no animals or food could grow
Cheer up a little
Midna: .....
You really ARE carefree
Link: But look take a look, the sky over there is bright so it's only a short rain shower
It'll clear up soon
Panel 2
Midna: For some reason I can't really trust what you're saying......
Link: Ahaha, but it's true
and if we're lucky
Panel 3
Link: Maybe we can
even see a rainbow
Panel 4&5
His carefreeness and my-pace attitude never changes
I wonder if he understands the danger the world is in.....
Panel 5
Midna: I don't care
Midna: I'll tell you something Link
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Panel 1
Midna: I probably
won't be able to see this world's rainbows
Panel 2
Link: ..huh?
Panel 4
Midna: You haven't forgotten, have you?
We, who live in the Twilight Realm, have been driven from this world of light
Midna: Just take a look at me and you'll understand that we're not suitable for light
The light is strong even now, so of course we have difficulties
Midna: These eyes of darkness cannot
appreciate the beauty of such moments in the light world
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Panel 2
Link: Excuse me Midna,
don't move and
Link: close your eyes
Panel 3
Midna: Link...?
Link: What do you see?
Midna: I What..? I don't see anything
Link: Yeah, that's true
Now try to
Panel 4
Imagine any color you like Midna
Just like a bridge, floating like a aurora
Panel 5
Midna: ......
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Panel 1
This instruction rings in behind my closed eyes
I'm used to the darkness but this warmth
....I don't know
Panel 3
Link: Did you see, Midna?
Panel 4
Link: That's a rainbow
Your own, very best rainbow of the world
Page 029
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Panel 1
Link: Each person has their own favorite color
No one sees it the same
Link: You may have been punished by the Gods
Panel 3
Link: Even though
I don't think there's anything to be offended by
Link: The existence of a rainbow is so vague is can be born in anyone's heart
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Panel 1
Link: No matter if your rainbow is different from this world's
There surely isn't any difference in the beauty of it
Panel 2
Link: Oh,
I wonder what the rainbow of Twilight looks like
Panel 2&3
Link: One day I'd like to see it
Panel 4
Midna: This color, which was engulfed in darkness
is now strongly spreading out
Panel 5
Link: Oh, look!
It already cleared up!
Page 031
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Panel 1
Link: Hey,
Midna
Panel 1&2
Midna: and piercing through hidden fear and hesitation
Panel 2
Link: Let's go and get your rainbow back!
Midna: Those azure eyes in front of me
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Legends
Prophecies
I don't believe in them
But if
He is the beast the passed down stories speak of
or even if he isn't
I want to go on with him together
---Cavalier---
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Panel 1
Link, the chosen hero traveled seven years through time, his sword held high in sworn duty to Princess Zelda
In order to save the land and people he loved, he took up the Ocarina of Time and thus began his legend
His quest brought light to both past and future, and hanging in the balance was theTriforce
Opposing him at every turn was Ganondorf, with his twisted dreams to lead the world to ruin
Since the days of Ocarina of Time, many hundred years have passed
And again, a sacred hero is starting a new legend....!
Panel 2
....or at least that's what they say.
A mysterious girl and a weird dog strolling playfully around: Twilight Princess
sfx: Let's go!!
sfx: woff woff
And the more you think about it, the more you'll like it.
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Title: Broke
Panel 1
L: Huh, I didn't realize I had hardly any rupees left
I wanted to buy some items, but collecting rupees is such a pain....
M: What about the rupee treasure chests still left in the dungeons
How about getting those? Definitely less tiring than cutting grass
Panel 2
L: Oh!
You're right!
M: I still remember where they are- let's go!
L: Right behind you!
Panel 3
And so they went to a dungeon
and quickly found a chest
sfx: clack
L: I wonder how many rupees...!
...Huh
Panel 4
You found the dungeon map
sfx: dadadadaaa da dadadaaa
M: Oh?
small at bottom: That happened to me already three times
Page 006
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Title: Unfaithful Behavior (I don't know that word?)
Panel 1
M: Hey, why are you wearing the magic armor?
L: You know, I've collected so many rupees...
In order to reduce them I decided to run around in it for a while
Panel 2
L: uwah
sfx: boing
sfx: NEIGH!
Panel 3
M: Strange, the effect shouldn't have worn off, yet you can't move....
L: Maybe she isn't feeling fine?
M: Possibly he armor is too heavy for her?
Panel 4
E: I don't remember training this child
E: to spend his money so carelessly!
Artist-small: For me, Epona is like a mother figure to Link
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Title: Swelling/Undulation
Panel 1
Box: Chuchu jelly
sfx: gulp gulp gulp
sfx: Uwah... (by Midna)
M: You really drink a lot of that stuff Link...
Panel 2
L: It tastes surprisingly good and its healthy too
M: No, I actually meant how you're feeling....
Cavalier Note: Not sure what this means.
L: Except for lantern oil, I put everything edible into it
And I think the faeries are just absorbed
M: Mmh.....
Panel 3
Box: Worms
sfx in background: swell (like dizzy?)
Big text: In order to preserve your well-being, this scene will be shown in mosaic
Panel 4
M: Hey, get up and drink!
You drink everything except for lantern oil, don't you?
L: Sorry!
Page 008
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Title: Wild larvae/grub
Panel 1
Box: You got bee larvae/grubs!
sfx: tattarataaa
sfx next to bee larvae: smile
Panel 2
M: Huh? In that bottle is only one, how are you supposed to use it eight times?
L: Ah,
Let me show you.....
Panel 3
L: You take it like this....
and then....
sfx: pinch
Panel 4
sfx: pinch
??-Text bubble: Gyaaaaaa
Page 9
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Title: Nature's Wisdom
Panel 1
Spirit: Oh, courageous hero
The Tears of Light you have collected have returned me to my original form
sfx: Oooooh!!
Panel 2&3
Faaaaaaaa....
Panel 4
Faron: My name is Faron....
L: Uhm..... wait......
There seems to be some.... misunderstanding....
F: My name is Faron... collect the Tears of Light in Hyrule
Artist's note: I still love those two!
Note: These two were the mascots of the expo in 2005 in Aichi, Japan
Page 010
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Title: Unwelcome Actions
Panel 1
Great Fairy: As you made it this far again, let me once again reward you with Fairy Tears
sfx: Here you go
Panel 2
L: Uhm...
L: Let me give this to you as a thanks for always being so kind
Panel 3
GF: Oh,
I'm happy! what is it?
L: Chuchu jelly!
GF: ...?
But why that...?
Panel 4
L:I've heard that gelatin is good for sagging breasts!
sfx: BANG!
Artist's note: I always wondered what happened to her being topless when she gets older
Page 011
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Title: Unexpected
Panel 1
Strong.
(Press B to attack)
Panel 2
Convenient.
(Sense)
Panel 3
Fast.
sfx: da~~sh
Panel 4
M: How can you live like this?
...why do I even bother asking
sfx: SNORE!
This is ridiculous!
Author's note: Being a dog must be nice.
Page 012
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Title: I'm really glad I met you
Panel 1
A monster appeared!
sfx: Kyaaaa
It'll eat us!
It'll kill us!
Run away!
sfx: Uwaaah
sfx: Gyaaa
Panel 2
T: A wolf! A wolf appeared!
No, it's a.....
T: A monster! Everyone, inside your homes!
Panel 3
Coro: Oh,
Oh its you again! You're really smart
sfx: stroke stroke
Coro: Poor thing, its not easy when everyone is scared of you
Panel 4
L: Ah.....
I only want to be hugged by that oil selling guy.....
sfx: crush/in love
M: He's more likely to fall in love with you if you'd save the Spirits of Light!
Page 013
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Title: Play/Do as you wish
Panel 1
Princess Zelda Princess Midna
Ilia
Panel 2
Agitha, Hena, Iza
And of course the buxom Telma
Panel 3
Beth: Say Link, you have met so many women, what are your standards for choosing a girl?
small note next to Beth: Adolescent Beth-chan
Link: Mmh?
Let's see...
Panel 4
Link: A fertile girl who gives a lot of milk would be nice
sfx: hahahahaha
Beth: Impossible....! What can you expect from a goat shepard!?
Artist note: He somehow likes goats
Page 014
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Title: The two chosen
Panel 1
Beth: At least answer this question!
Out of these two, Princess Midna and Princess Zelda, which one is your type?
Small next to Beth: Decide! Which of these two beauties is it?!?!?!
Link: Hmmm... let me think...
Panel 2
sfx: Groooooooo
sfx: Ooaaahh...
Link: .........................
Next to Beth: Tell me! Tell me!
Panel 3
Link: Ehm, their social status is too high, I probably prefer a girl like Beth
sfx: ha..haha..haha...
Beth: Oh...! You charmer!
sfx: Awwww
Box: There was no way for him to escape this.
Artist note: Men are just like this (...)
Page 015
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Title: The Incident
Panel 1
Major Bo: What! You say the children... and the Goron tribe are...!!
Major Bo: ...I see
In that case the time has come for me to teach you a secret...
Panel 2
Link: This.. this here is...?
Major Bo: Are you ready Link?
Swear to keep this place and what is going to happen a secret
Link: ... I promise
Panel 3
Major Bo: Gggggoood! The..the..then take off your clothes.....!
sfx: Hahahah GASP!
sfx: Gah!
sfx: GASP!
Artists note: Request for self-defense by law!!
Page 016
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Title: The Incident, 2
Panel 1
Shad: What!?
You went to the City in the Sky!?
Panel 2 (OMG, apologies to the editor- this is going to be insane! Just use your best judgement if you need to edit the text down)
Shad: Uwaaah! It really exists! The city in the Sky does really exists..! wow!
Say, what kind of place is it? The sky people? The buildings? The geology?!
Shad: C..Ca..Can I go, too....!?
sfx: ooooooooh
Link: I suppose it's impossible for.. ordinary people...
Shad: Is...is..is that so? You don't just say that without reason, do you?
Aaa, this is a dilemma! I can't stop my excitement...!
I'm so curious, so curious! Ah, right, so I just have to ask you many questions! I can't help it! Where should I begin, what should I ask!? What to do what to do what to do
Rina's note to the editor: Just fill this speech bubble up with his totally pointless rambling. Just make it smaller towards the end and end in the middle of a sentence
Panel 3
Shad: That's right!
I won't let you go home tonight!
sfx: Gah
Artist's Note: After investigation the assaulted was found having a grudge against the defendant
Page 017
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Title: Save once before fighting a boss
Panel 1
With a weapon from ancient times he fights a decisive battle with Stallord who was woken from his deep slumber
on the execution grounds in a desert of a blood stained history
Panel 2
With the sound of his fragile neck crumbling the battle is won
But what lies waiting before him
is the sages' wish
A new truth will now be revealed
Panel 3
Midna: Link..!
We have to get to the Mirror Chamber! Let's hurry....!
Panel 4
sfx: Uwah
Link: Al~right!
Let's reset and fight one more time!
sfx: It'll be fun!!!
Midna: You stupid mutt..!!
Artist note: I also played the City in the Sky many times... the next boss is just too much fun
Page 018
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Title: The Man in the Lake
Panel 1
sfx: splash
sfx: GASP!
Panel 2
sfx: Uwah
Link: Even though I'm wearing the Zora tunic it's terribly cold at dawn
sfx: SMACK!
Midna: Then just take it off
Link: But I'll be coming back soon anyway so changing my tunic would just be annoying
Panel 3
Link: Why is there a temple underwater anyway?
sfx: more smacking sounds
Midna: Complain as much as you like
small: you don't have to come back
sfx: stare
Panel 4
A few days later....
On the poster:
Link: What! A new twilight beast!
small: I can't forgive you, Zant!!
Midna: No.. I think that is...
Page 019
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A Man's Limit
Panel 1
Ralis: We, the Zora race, once had a shape similar
Oh, and according to my ancestors records a princess once married a hero
Maybe Link and I have similar ancestors along the line
Panel 2
Ralis: If thats true, I'd be so happy
to be related to so many humans! Unbelievable!
But...
Panel 3
Box: Fish Mating
First the female fish lays eggs
Later, the male fish scatters his seed on the eggs
Panel 4
Link: What incredible ancestors!!
sfx: grip
Next to OoT Link: hahaha
Did you call?
Artist note: Most obviously Ocarina of Time's Link
Page 020
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Title: Come to think of it, they never met
Panel 1
Midna: Prin...
Princess....
Panel 2
Zelda: Midna, I wanted to meet you
Panel 3
Zelda: But
Panel 4
Zelda: Who is that dirty-looking young man?
small: Casually entering Hyrule Castle without permission. Unforgivable!
Link's sfx: nonchalant
Midna: Princess...
Artist's note: This time Link and Zelda didn't have much interaction....
Page 022
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Crimson eyes of darkness, azure eyes of the sky
Page 023
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Panel 1
In Twilight, there is a legend passed down from generation to generation about a blue-eyed beast
...that no one believes
Panel 2
I didn't believe that he would actually appear
But
He took the holy sword and fulfilled the legend
But still I didn't
Panel 3
acknowledge him as the savior of the world
sfx: drip
Page 024
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Panel 1
Midna: A raindrop
Panel 2
Link: Yep...
But with so little rain we should be.......
ok
Panel 3
sfx: SHHHH!!!!
M/L: .........
Panel 4
sfx: SHHHHH!!!!
Panel 5
Midna: Geez.....
Link, you're so counterproductive. You've jinxed everything
Panel 6
Link: Haha, stop complaining
We found our resting spot early today, so what?
Midna: ...good thing you have such good luck and a carefree attitude
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Panel 1
Link: But I don't dislike the rain ]
If there's no rain no animals or food couldn't survive
So cheer up!
Midna: .....
You really ARE carefree
Link: But look take a look, the sky over there is bright so it's only a short rain shower
It'll clear up soon
Panel 2
Midna: For some reason I can't really trust what you're saying......
Link: Ahaha, but it's true
and if we're lucky
Panel 3
Link: Maybe we can
even see a rainbow
Panel 4&5
His carefree attitude never changes
I wonder if he understands the danger the world is in.....
Panel 5
Midna: I don't care
Midna: I'll tell you something Link
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Panel 1
Midna: I probably
won't be able to see this world's rainbows
Panel 2
Link: ..huh?
Panel 4
Midna: You haven't forgotten, have you?
We, who live in the Twilight Realm, have been driven from this world of light
Midna: Just take a look at me and you'll understand that we're not suitable for light
The light is strong even now, so of course we have difficulties
Midna: These eyes of darkness cannot
appreciate the beauty of such moments in the world of light
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Panel 2
Link: Excuse me Midna,
don't move and
Link: close your eyes
Panel 3
Midna: Link...?
Link: What do you see?
Midna: I What..? I don't see anything
Link: Yeah, that's true
Now try to
Panel 4
Imagine any color you like Midna
Just like a bridge, floating like an aurora
Panel 5
Midna: ......
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Panel 1
This instruction rings in behind my closed eyes
Cavalier Note: Note sure what this means.
I'm used to the darkness but this warmth
....I don't know
Panel 3
Link: Did you see, Midna?
Panel 4
Link: That's a rainbow
Its all yours, the most beautiful rainbow in the world
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Panel 1
Link: Each person has their own favorite color
No one sees it the same way
Link: You may have been punished by the Gods
Panel 3
Link: But even still
I don't think there's any reason to be sad
Link: A rainbow can be born in anyone's heart
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Panel 1
Link: No matter if that rainbow is different from this world's
There surely isn't any difference in the beauty of it
Panel 2
Link: Oh,
I wonder what the rainbow of Twilight looks like
Panel 2&3
Link: One day I'd like to see it
Panel 4
Midna: This color, which was engulfed in darkness
is now strongly spreading out
Panel 5
Link: Oh, look!
It already cleared up!
Page 031
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Panel 1
Link: Hey,
Midna
Panel 1&2
Midna: and piercing through hidden fear and hesitation
Panel 2
Link: Let's go and get your rainbow back!
Midna: Those azure eyes in front of me
Page 032
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Legends
Prophecies
I don't believe in them
But if
He may be the beast of legend spoken of in the ancient stories
but even if he isn't
I want to go on with him together[/quote]
Cavalier: Thats my first draft. Let me know what you guys think.
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Panel 1
Link, the chosen hero traveled seven years through time, his sword held high in sworn duty to Princess Zelda
In order to save the land and people he loved, he took up the Ocarina of Time and thus began his legend
His quest brought light to both past and future, and hanging in the balance was theTriforce
Opposing him at every turn was Ganondorf, with his twisted dreams to lead the world to ruin
Since the days of Ocarina of Time, many hundred years have passed
And again, a sacred hero is starting a new legend....!
Panel 2
....or at least that's what they say.
A mysterious girl and a weird dog strolling playfully around: Twilight Princess
sfx: Let's go!!
sfx: woff woff
And the more you think about it, the more you'll like it.
Page 005
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Title: Broke
Panel 1
L: Huh, I didn't realize I had hardly any rupees left
I wanted to buy some items, but collecting rupees is such a pain....
M: What about the rupee treasure chests still left in the dungeons
How about getting those? Definitely less tiring than cutting grass
Panel 2
L: Oh!
You're right!
M: I still remember where they are- let's go!
L: Right behind you!
Panel 3
And so they went to a dungeon
and quickly found a chest
sfx: clack
L: I wonder how many rupees...!
...Huh
Panel 4
You found the dungeon map
sfx: dadadadaaa da dadadaaa
M: Oh?
small at bottom: That happened to me already three times
Page 006
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Title: Unfaithful Behavior (I don't know that word?)
Panel 1
M: Hey, why are you wearing the magic armor?
L: You know, I've collected so many rupees...
In order to reduce them I decided to run around in it for a while
Panel 2
L: uwah
sfx: boing
sfx: NEIGH!
Panel 3
M: Strange, the effect shouldn't have worn off, yet you can't move....
L: Maybe she isn't feeling fine?
M: Possibly he armor is too heavy for her?
Panel 4
E: I don't remember training this child
E: to spend his money so carelessly!
Artist-small: For me, Epona is like a mother figure to Link
Page 007
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Title: Swelling/Undulation
Panel 1
Box: Chuchu jelly
sfx: gulp gulp gulp
sfx: Uwah... (by Midna)
M: You really drink a lot of that stuff Link...
Panel 2
L: It tastes surprisingly good and its healthy too
M: No, I actually meant how you're feeling....
Cavalier Note: Not sure what this means.
L: Except for lantern oil, I put everything edible into it
And I think the faeries are just absorbed
M: Mmh.....
Panel 3
Box: Worms
sfx in background: swell (like dizzy?)
Big text: In order to preserve your well-being, this scene will be shown in mosaic
Panel 4
M: Hey, get up and drink!
You drink everything except for lantern oil, don't you?
L: Sorry!
Page 008
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Title: Wild larvae/grub
Panel 1
Box: You got bee larvae/grubs!
sfx: tattarataaa
sfx next to bee larvae: smile
Panel 2
M: Huh? In that bottle is only one, how are you supposed to use it eight times?
L: Ah,
Let me show you.....
Panel 3
L: You take it like this....
and then....
sfx: pinch
Panel 4
sfx: pinch
??-Text bubble: Gyaaaaaa
Page 9
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Title: Nature's Wisdom
Panel 1
Spirit: Oh, courageous hero
The Tears of Light you have collected have returned me to my original form
sfx: Oooooh!!
Panel 2&3
Faaaaaaaa....
Panel 4
Faron: My name is Faron....
L: Uhm..... wait......
There seems to be some.... misunderstanding....
F: My name is Faron... collect the Tears of Light in Hyrule
Artist's note: I still love those two!
Note: These two were the mascots of the expo in 2005 in Aichi, Japan
Page 010
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Title: Unwelcome Actions
Panel 1
Great Fairy: As you made it this far again, let me once again reward you with Fairy Tears
sfx: Here you go
Panel 2
L: Uhm...
L: Let me give this to you as a thanks for always being so kind
Panel 3
GF: Oh,
I'm happy! what is it?
L: Chuchu jelly!
GF: ...?
But why that...?
Panel 4
L:I've heard that gelatin is good for sagging breasts!
sfx: BANG!
Artist's note: I always wondered what happened to her being topless when she gets older
Page 011
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Title: Unexpected
Panel 1
Strong.
(Press B to attack)
Panel 2
Convenient.
(Sense)
Panel 3
Fast.
sfx: da~~sh
Panel 4
M: How can you live like this?
...why do I even bother asking
sfx: SNORE!
This is ridiculous!
Author's note: Being a dog must be nice.
Page 012
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Title: I'm really glad I met you
Panel 1
A monster appeared!
sfx: Kyaaaa
It'll eat us!
It'll kill us!
Run away!
sfx: Uwaaah
sfx: Gyaaa
Panel 2
T: A wolf! A wolf appeared!
No, it's a.....
T: A monster! Everyone, inside your homes!
Panel 3
Coro: Oh,
Oh its you again! You're really smart
sfx: stroke stroke
Coro: Poor thing, its not easy when everyone is scared of you
Panel 4
L: Ah.....
I only want to be hugged by that oil selling guy.....
sfx: crush/in love
M: He's more likely to fall in love with you if you'd save the Spirits of Light!
Page 013
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Title: Play/Do as you wish
Panel 1
Princess Zelda Princess Midna
Ilia
Panel 2
Agitha, Hena, Iza
And of course the buxom Telma
Panel 3
Beth: Say Link, you have met so many women, what are your standards for choosing a girl?
small note next to Beth: Adolescent Beth-chan
Link: Mmh?
Let's see...
Panel 4
Link: A fertile girl who gives a lot of milk would be nice
sfx: hahahahaha
Beth: Impossible....! What can you expect from a goat shepard!?
Artist note: He somehow likes goats
Page 014
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Title: The two chosen
Panel 1
Beth: At least answer this question!
Out of these two, Princess Midna and Princess Zelda, which one is your type?
Small next to Beth: Decide! Which of these two beauties is it?!?!?!
Link: Hmmm... let me think...
Panel 2
sfx: Groooooooo
sfx: Ooaaahh...
Link: .........................
Next to Beth: Tell me! Tell me!
Panel 3
Link: Ehm, their social status is too high, I probably prefer a girl like Beth
sfx: ha..haha..haha...
Beth: Oh...! You charmer!
sfx: Awwww
Box: There was no way for him to escape this.
Artist note: Men are just like this (...)
Page 015
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Title: The Incident
Panel 1
Major Bo: What! You say the children... and the Goron tribe are...!!
Major Bo: ...I see
In that case the time has come for me to teach you a secret...
Panel 2
Link: This.. this here is...?
Major Bo: Are you ready Link?
Swear to keep this place and what is going to happen a secret
Link: ... I promise
Panel 3
Major Bo: Gggggoood! The..the..then take off your clothes.....!
sfx: Hahahah GASP!
sfx: Gah!
sfx: GASP!
Artists note: Request for self-defense by law!!
Page 016
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Title: The Incident, 2
Panel 1
Shad: What!?
You went to the City in the Sky!?
Panel 2 (OMG, apologies to the editor- this is going to be insane! Just use your best judgement if you need to edit the text down)
Shad: Uwaaah! It really exists! The city in the Sky does really exists..! wow!
Say, what kind of place is it? The sky people? The buildings? The geology?!
Shad: C..Ca..Can I go, too....!?
sfx: ooooooooh
Link: I suppose it's impossible for.. ordinary people...
Shad: Is...is..is that so? You don't just say that without reason, do you?
Aaa, this is a dilemma! I can't stop my excitement...!
I'm so curious, so curious! Ah, right, so I just have to ask you many questions! I can't help it! Where should I begin, what should I ask!? What to do what to do what to do
Rina's note to the editor: Just fill this speech bubble up with his totally pointless rambling. Just make it smaller towards the end and end in the middle of a sentence
Panel 3
Shad: That's right!
I won't let you go home tonight!
sfx: Gah
Artist's Note: After investigation the assaulted was found having a grudge against the defendant
Page 017
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Title: Save once before fighting a boss
Panel 1
With a weapon from ancient times he fights a decisive battle with Stallord who was woken from his deep slumber
on the execution grounds in a desert of a blood stained history
Panel 2
With the sound of his fragile neck crumbling the battle is won
But what lies waiting before him
is the sages' wish
A new truth will now be revealed
Panel 3
Midna: Link..!
We have to get to the Mirror Chamber! Let's hurry....!
Panel 4
sfx: Uwah
Link: Al~right!
Let's reset and fight one more time!
sfx: It'll be fun!!!
Midna: You stupid mutt..!!
Artist note: I also played the City in the Sky many times... the next boss is just too much fun
Page 018
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Title: The Man in the Lake
Panel 1
sfx: splash
sfx: GASP!
Panel 2
sfx: Uwah
Link: Even though I'm wearing the Zora tunic it's terribly cold at dawn
sfx: SMACK!
Midna: Then just take it off
Link: But I'll be coming back soon anyway so changing my tunic would just be annoying
Panel 3
Link: Why is there a temple underwater anyway?
sfx: more smacking sounds
Midna: Complain as much as you like
small: you don't have to come back
sfx: stare
Panel 4
A few days later....
On the poster:
- Beware of this!!
Long head tail
sticking out eyes
body: scales
back: spikes
feet: webs
water puddles
Kakariko Village
Link: What! A new twilight beast!
small: I can't forgive you, Zant!!
Midna: No.. I think that is...
Page 019
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A Man's Limit
Panel 1
Ralis: We, the Zora race, once had a shape similar
Oh, and according to my ancestors records a princess once married a hero
Maybe Link and I have similar ancestors along the line
Panel 2
Ralis: If thats true, I'd be so happy
to be related to so many humans! Unbelievable!
But...
Panel 3
Box: Fish Mating
First the female fish lays eggs
Later, the male fish scatters his seed on the eggs
Panel 4
Link: What incredible ancestors!!
sfx: grip
Next to OoT Link: hahaha
Did you call?
Artist note: Most obviously Ocarina of Time's Link
Page 020
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Title: Come to think of it, they never met
Panel 1
Midna: Prin...
Princess....
Panel 2
Zelda: Midna, I wanted to meet you
Panel 3
Zelda: But
Panel 4
Zelda: Who is that dirty-looking young man?
small: Casually entering Hyrule Castle without permission. Unforgivable!
Link's sfx: nonchalant
Midna: Princess...
Artist's note: This time Link and Zelda didn't have much interaction....
Page 022
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Crimson eyes of darkness, azure eyes of the sky
Page 023
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Panel 1
In Twilight, there is a legend passed down from generation to generation about a blue-eyed beast
...that no one believes
Panel 2
I didn't believe that he would actually appear
But
He took the holy sword and fulfilled the legend
But still I didn't
Panel 3
acknowledge him as the savior of the world
sfx: drip
Page 024
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Panel 1
Midna: A raindrop
Panel 2
Link: Yep...
But with so little rain we should be.......
ok
Panel 3
sfx: SHHHH!!!!
M/L: .........
Panel 4
sfx: SHHHHH!!!!
Panel 5
Midna: Geez.....
Link, you're so counterproductive. You've jinxed everything
Panel 6
Link: Haha, stop complaining
We found our resting spot early today, so what?
Midna: ...good thing you have such good luck and a carefree attitude
Page 025
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Panel 1
Link: But I don't dislike the rain ]
If there's no rain no animals or food couldn't survive
So cheer up!
Midna: .....
You really ARE carefree
Link: But look take a look, the sky over there is bright so it's only a short rain shower
It'll clear up soon
Panel 2
Midna: For some reason I can't really trust what you're saying......
Link: Ahaha, but it's true
and if we're lucky
Panel 3
Link: Maybe we can
even see a rainbow
Panel 4&5
His carefree attitude never changes
I wonder if he understands the danger the world is in.....
Panel 5
Midna: I don't care
Midna: I'll tell you something Link
Page 026
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Panel 1
Midna: I probably
won't be able to see this world's rainbows
Panel 2
Link: ..huh?
Panel 4
Midna: You haven't forgotten, have you?
We, who live in the Twilight Realm, have been driven from this world of light
Midna: Just take a look at me and you'll understand that we're not suitable for light
The light is strong even now, so of course we have difficulties
Midna: These eyes of darkness cannot
appreciate the beauty of such moments in the world of light
Page 027
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Panel 2
Link: Excuse me Midna,
don't move and
Link: close your eyes
Panel 3
Midna: Link...?
Link: What do you see?
Midna: I What..? I don't see anything
Link: Yeah, that's true
Now try to
Panel 4
Imagine any color you like Midna
Just like a bridge, floating like an aurora
Panel 5
Midna: ......
Page 028
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Panel 1
This instruction rings in behind my closed eyes
Cavalier Note: Note sure what this means.
I'm used to the darkness but this warmth
....I don't know
Panel 3
Link: Did you see, Midna?
Panel 4
Link: That's a rainbow
Its all yours, the most beautiful rainbow in the world
Page 029
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Panel 1
Link: Each person has their own favorite color
No one sees it the same way
Link: You may have been punished by the Gods
Panel 3
Link: But even still
I don't think there's any reason to be sad
Link: A rainbow can be born in anyone's heart
Page 030
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Panel 1
Link: No matter if that rainbow is different from this world's
There surely isn't any difference in the beauty of it
Panel 2
Link: Oh,
I wonder what the rainbow of Twilight looks like
Panel 2&3
Link: One day I'd like to see it
Panel 4
Midna: This color, which was engulfed in darkness
is now strongly spreading out
Panel 5
Link: Oh, look!
It already cleared up!
Page 031
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Panel 1
Link: Hey,
Midna
Panel 1&2
Midna: and piercing through hidden fear and hesitation
Panel 2
Link: Let's go and get your rainbow back!
Midna: Those azure eyes in front of me
Page 032
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Legends
Prophecies
I don't believe in them
But if
He may be the beast of legend spoken of in the ancient stories
but even if he isn't
I want to go on with him together[/quote]
Cavalier: Thats my first draft. Let me know what you guys think.
